Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "Candle in the Window "Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
12 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, what a wonderful follow-up to the home hearth and the face of the mom (wife? daughter?) on the floating flakes thereof... Well done, my lady! :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
P.S. Only about 5 days behind now.... Lol! I'll get caught up soon, though, and star there.. ;) Until, of course, something unexpected happens (that could never happen, yeah? Ugh!) ;) ;) ;)
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Oh, what a wonderful follow-up to the home hearth and the face of the mom (wife? daughter?) on the floating flakes thereof... Well done, my lady! :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
P.S. Only about 5 days behind now.... Lol! I'll get caught up soon, though, and star there.. ;) Until, of course, something unexpected happens (that could never happen, yeah? Ugh!) ;) ;) ;)
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Appreciate your taking time to read and review - know you have precious little free time! Always nice to hear your input. Stay healthy!
Comment from Aussie
Way back in the middle ages, it was said that a candle lit in the window would bring a loved one home by showing the light. Only a little poem but has a loving message. K xx
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Way back in the middle ages, it was said that a candle lit in the window would bring a loved one home by showing the light. Only a little poem but has a loving message. K xx
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing your insightful thoughts!
Comment from royowen
What a great response to this fabulous renga series introduced by Gypsy Blue Rose as a poetic adventure in Japanese style poetry, what an asset you are June. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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What a great response to this fabulous renga series introduced by Gypsy Blue Rose as a poetic adventure in Japanese style poetry, what an asset you are June. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the positive feedback!
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Welcome June
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Candle in the Window
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
A perfect fit for my 5/7/5 stanza. Good job following the theme. You do well with the renga form. Thank you very much for your addition to our book.
Hugs,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Candle in the Window
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
A perfect fit for my 5/7/5 stanza. Good job following the theme. You do well with the renga form. Thank you very much for your addition to our book.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the positive feedback! Glad you felt this was an appropriate follow up couplet.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I enjoy reading this poem about home coming. It is a perfect one. The light expressed the longing. The flickering was so animating as though it was talking.
Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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I enjoy reading this poem about home coming. It is a perfect one. The light expressed the longing. The flickering was so animating as though it was talking.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can identify with these words here June and I am watching that flam burning from afar, a beautiful presentation for Gypsy's book, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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I can identify with these words here June and I am watching that flam burning from afar, a beautiful presentation for Gypsy's book, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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So glad this piece resonated with you. Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments!
Comment from Gloria ....
There is always something so welcoming about a flickering candle in the window. Yes, a sign for those who have traveled so long, that the home are still burning.
Excellent contribution to the Renga book and a nice change in atmosphere.
Gloria
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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There is always something so welcoming about a flickering candle in the window. Yes, a sign for those who have traveled so long, that the home are still burning.
Excellent contribution to the Renga book and a nice change in atmosphere.
Gloria
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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So glad this piece resonated with you. Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments!
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, this was absolutely beautiful. A stunning presentation and artwork. I have never tried a Renga, but judging by the rules of the form, this fits a form to a "t". Great descriptive imagery and visuals.
A very delightful work.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Oh, this was absolutely beautiful. A stunning presentation and artwork. I have never tried a Renga, but judging by the rules of the form, this fits a form to a "t". Great descriptive imagery and visuals.
A very delightful work.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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So glad this piece resonated with you. Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
WOW, this poem is so perfect :"
Light flickers in the shadows
Welcoming the homesick heart "Penelope waiting for Ulysses. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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WOW, this poem is so perfect :"
Light flickers in the shadows
Welcoming the homesick heart "Penelope waiting for Ulysses. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your insightful review!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Oh, June!
I love the sentiments expressed in your well-crafted couplet. My mother so loved lighted candles = welcoming home, indeed. I do as well...
Beautiful addition to the Renga!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Oh, June!
I love the sentiments expressed in your well-crafted couplet. My mother so loved lighted candles = welcoming home, indeed. I do as well...
Beautiful addition to the Renga!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your insightful review!