Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is an inventive write as we journey home with the memory of someone we yearn to see on our mind. An ambient few words that hit the spot, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020

Thank you very much for your review and valuable feedback. It's so good to hear from you :)

Hugs,

Gypsy

Comment from karenina

Excellent

"Her face on each flake".....

Brilliant!

I ALMOST jumped on on this one...had something in mind I thought would meld nicely...but alas, I chickened out! Maybe next time....

Karenina

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020

Thank you very much for your review, Karenina

Gypsy

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 in addition to the multi-author Renga book. The sunrise is always a welcome sign after the long night when we feel the warmth of the sun rays entering our homes.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020

Thank you very much, Sandra. I am happy that you like it.

Gypsy

Comment from Lennie Conrad

Excellent

I see sunrise as a gentle yet powerful mother in this piece. Just as easily as she encourages us to follow the trail to adventure, she will guide us back home.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020

Thank you very much, Lennie, I appreciate your review.

Hugs,
Gypsy

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I really like this poem which is beautifully written. The image is astonishing. I especially like the last line "Her face on each flake. Well done.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020

Thank you very much, Lisa, I appreciate your review.

Hugs,
Gypsy

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Wow, love makes everything glow:"sunrise warms the trail

that leads to our cozy hearth --

her face on each flake"

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020

Thank you very much, Iza, I appreciate your review.

Hugs,
Gypsy

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

A warm trailing leading us back home - each flake reflecting our loved one's face. How romantic - nature with a touch of humanity. Not just a landscape. Nice.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020

Thank you very much, June, I appreciate your review. I'm glad you like it. :)

Hugs,
Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like how you tell a whole story in this little haiku. I especially liked you expressed the yearning to see, the excitement of reunion with "her face on each flake." Beautifully done!

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020

Thank you very much for getting my haiku...I appreciate your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy

Comment from lightink

Excellent

I like how you intertwined the sense of warmth with cold - and added a hint of omnipresence to all this. Pleasant reading that engages the senses!Wonderful addition to the renga book!

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020

Thank you very much, Jyoti, I appreciate your time and review. Have a peaceful evening.

hugs,
gypsy

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Isn't it funny, when we are looking for someone, that tends to happen, one see that face on everything one sees, I love this renga thing dear Gypsy, well dine, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020

Thank you very much for the encouraging and kind words. Have a lovely day, my friend.

hugs,

gypsy

reply by royowen on 12-Aug-2020

You too Gypsy.