Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Enfolding Eternity"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from harmony13
I found these words uplifting, motivating and creative. I pondered
on living in the moment and enjoying the beauty of nature right now!
The poem flows and connects well.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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I found these words uplifting, motivating and creative. I pondered
on living in the moment and enjoying the beauty of nature right now!
The poem flows and connects well.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Maria, for stopping by on this shorty -- always so great to hear from you! ;) Enjoy the rest of the weekend out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from ESOSTINE
Quite a creative style of poetry. I am getting to learn this for the first time. It encourages productive collaboration among writers. Thanks for sharing your knowledge and inspiration.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Quite a creative style of poetry. I am getting to learn this for the first time. It encourages productive collaboration among writers. Thanks for sharing your knowledge and inspiration.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, ECOSTINE, for stopping by on this shorty, sir -- great to hear from you! ;) Enjoy the rest of the weekend out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Stephen Force
Interesting form, nice offering, nicely linked by "love" and the pilgrim of passion picture. I have never heard of t Renga form, am I to assume that "nature" serves as the kigo? Well done. Steve
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Interesting form, nice offering, nicely linked by "love" and the pilgrim of passion picture. I have never heard of t Renga form, am I to assume that "nature" serves as the kigo? Well done. Steve
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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I really wouldn't know all the 'details' on the nuances of this poetry, Steve (sorry!!), but Gypsy would be glad to answer, I'm sure! ;) Thanx so much for stopping by on this shorty, sir -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Iza Deleanu
WOW, what a picture it perfectly matched the poem: "with heart open wide in love
this world's rhythm we embrace" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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WOW, what a picture it perfectly matched the poem: "with heart open wide in love
this world's rhythm we embrace" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Iza, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
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Good luck with the sale🥰
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Nice follow-up--thanks for including the prior for reference. Open wide / embrace makes me visualize a huge heart, each half a wing to enfold. Cheers. LIZ
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Nice follow-up--thanks for including the prior for reference. Open wide / embrace makes me visualize a huge heart, each half a wing to enfold. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Liz, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Therese Caron
This little poem is beautiful. It is amazing what can be conveyed in two lines. Your picture is gorgeous, with unbelievable colors, making a lovely presentation.
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This little poem is beautiful. It is amazing what can be conveyed in two lines. Your picture is gorgeous, with unbelievable colors, making a lovely presentation.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Therese, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Patty Palmer
When we are so totally in the throes of love, our whole world looks beautiful and we embrace everything the world has to offer. The picture is also an enhancement of the poem. Great job!
Patty
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When we are so totally in the throes of love, our whole world looks beautiful and we embrace everything the world has to offer. The picture is also an enhancement of the poem. Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Patty, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from mauial
Thoughtful piece and that's a good thing even if we come to different conclusions. My conclusion is I don't know if I would want to embrace this world's rhythm as it rejects love. Just look at all the hateful things being done and promoted. If the world would embrace it back then that's another story. But that will never happen as long as this is true: the world is all lying in the Evil One (1John 5:19 Byington)
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Thoughtful piece and that's a good thing even if we come to different conclusions. My conclusion is I don't know if I would want to embrace this world's rhythm as it rejects love. Just look at all the hateful things being done and promoted. If the world would embrace it back then that's another story. But that will never happen as long as this is true: the world is all lying in the Evil One (1John 5:19 Byington)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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You are right, but to turn a back and not 'get in there' and offer love, doesn't sound like the correct response either... Thanx so much, mauial, for stopping by on this shorty -- great to hear from you! ;) Enjoy the rest of the weekend out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Beautiful poem and beautiful art work. I really enjoy this new entry for the Renga book. It may inspire me to add a new chapter.
In the current situation, I love the optimistic tone of the poem.
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Beautiful poem and beautiful art work. I really enjoy this new entry for the Renga book. It may inspire me to add a new chapter.
In the current situation, I love the optimistic tone of the poem.
Well done.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Lisa, for stopping by on this shorty -- always great to hear from you, my lady! ;) Enjoy the rest of the weekend out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
This was well done, Yvette. I am so glad the Gypsy Blue Rose started this, it has expanded immensely. I like the concept of the Renga, not that I want to try it right now, but the idea is great. In so few words you have managed to say so much. The picture was a wonderful touch as well. Very much enjoyed.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This was well done, Yvette. I am so glad the Gypsy Blue Rose started this, it has expanded immensely. I like the concept of the Renga, not that I want to try it right now, but the idea is great. In so few words you have managed to say so much. The picture was a wonderful touch as well. Very much enjoyed.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Awwww, come on -- give 'er a go, my lady! ;) :) Thanx so much, Alie, for stopping by on this shorty -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
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You are so welcome Yvette, nope not right now, lol.
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You are so welcome Yvette, nope not right now, lol.