Necessary Response
What will be your answer to the chaos...?23 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Hello Writer,
You done about as well as can be done within a 2-4-2 format
with a marvelous message and perfect art work to match.
The light of hope often shines
when the darkness is greatest.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Hello Writer,
You done about as well as can be done within a 2-4-2 format
with a marvelous message and perfect art work to match.
The light of hope often shines
when the darkness is greatest.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Wow, Robert - thank you, THANK YOU so very much for your wonderful review and those shining stars - so very appreciated!! We all have to be deliberate in offering that light lest we become part of the darkness... Take care and have an awesome remainder of the week!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, Necessary Response, has the right set up and shines with optimism in our current struggles with life and decision-making.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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This 2-4-2, Necessary Response, has the right set up and shines with optimism in our current struggles with life and decision-making.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review today.
Comment from RShipp
If only this was the way of the world. Enjoyed!
I believe you have met the requirements for this contest: Write a 2-4-2 syllable poem. It has three lines. The first line has 2 syllables, the second one 4 syllables and the last line 2 syllables. The subject can be anything.
Best of luck with the "2-4-2 writing prompt" contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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If only this was the way of the world. Enjoyed!
I believe you have met the requirements for this contest: Write a 2-4-2 syllable poem. It has three lines. The first line has 2 syllables, the second one 4 syllables and the last line 2 syllables. The subject can be anything.
Best of luck with the "2-4-2 writing prompt" contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review today.
Comment from elchupakabra
This is a mantra that I have spent a lot of time learning, and I can admit it took me longer than it probably should have. Great work on this short piece and good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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This is a mantra that I have spent a lot of time learning, and I can admit it took me longer than it probably should have. Great work on this short piece and good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review today.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I could understand your subject in the words you chose for the entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt. I wish you great good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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I could understand your subject in the words you chose for the entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt. I wish you great good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Glad you could understand, thank you.
Comment from lyenochka
Great message in your brief 2-4-2 poem! We need Hope so much these days and there is too much darkness in the news and in social media. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Great message in your brief 2-4-2 poem! We need Hope so much these days and there is too much darkness in the news and in social media. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your review today.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
Kudos!
Both for form and message!
Truly a timely poetic message - especially for these days of uncertainty and darkness!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Kudos!
Both for form and message!
Truly a timely poetic message - especially for these days of uncertainty and darkness!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your review today, diane.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
This is a poem of hope and something more substantial. Your voice comes across as not just letters on paper but, in actual fact a voice that whispers a person is not alone with you around. Great entry to contest. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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This is a poem of hope and something more substantial. Your voice comes across as not just letters on paper but, in actual fact a voice that whispers a person is not alone with you around. Great entry to contest. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Wow - such a moving review... Thanks so very much, kiwigirl!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. I like the hope topic.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. I like the hope topic.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review today.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have conveyed a powerful message in the few syllables the prompt allowed. The Bible says believers should uplift others. When people are down, they need to seek the company of upbeat, encouraging people!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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You have conveyed a powerful message in the few syllables the prompt allowed. The Bible says believers should uplift others. When people are down, they need to seek the company of upbeat, encouraging people!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your review today.
