Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Spirit of the Lotus"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Spirit of the Lotus, presented in a 5-7-5 format, joins the renga and combines humanity, the rest of nature, and faith.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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This haiku, Spirit of the Lotus, presented in a 5-7-5 format, joins the renga and combines humanity, the rest of nature, and faith.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Irish Rain
How very pretty Miss June.
Your picture and words are a
perfect match, and so very true.
We certainly do flourish with faith.
A lovely Renga.
Blessings...
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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How very pretty Miss June.
Your picture and words are a
perfect match, and so very true.
We certainly do flourish with faith.
A lovely Renga.
Blessings...
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this couplet. Always nice to hear from you.
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Have a lovely Wednesday!!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaaah.... from dragons to the blossoming hope of the human spirit: she must fight at times to hold onto that hope... Love the gentle 'follow-on' here to the previous, June - gives us a range of depth that only faith can provide! Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Aaaah.... from dragons to the blossoming hope of the human spirit: she must fight at times to hold onto that hope... Love the gentle 'follow-on' here to the previous, June - gives us a range of depth that only faith can provide! Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this couplet. Your follow up was really amazing and fit perfectly with the theme.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem in addition to the multi-author Renga book. The lotus flower reminds of the human spirit that is born from tiny seedlings of hope and flourish with faith.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem in addition to the multi-author Renga book. The lotus flower reminds of the human spirit that is born from tiny seedlings of hope and flourish with faith.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gloria ....
A perfect addition to the renga book, and your artwork choice is inspired. It appears ethereal which is the essence of spirit and faith.
Excellent read today and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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A perfect addition to the renga book, and your artwork choice is inspired. It appears ethereal which is the essence of spirit and faith.
Excellent read today and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts! Much appreciated.
Comment from royowen
I think you've done an outstanding job with this renga response June, you really understand the process of the person within, which only a person who has been shown, or rather been taught within, well done, great contribution, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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I think you've done an outstanding job with this renga response June, you really understand the process of the person within, which only a person who has been shown, or rather been taught within, well done, great contribution, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts! Much appreciated.
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Welcome June
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, June,
Excellent entry for the renga book. I like the hope topic. Thank you very much for adding a chapter and author notes. Happy Monday.
Hugs,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Hello, June,
Excellent entry for the renga book. I like the hope topic. Thank you very much for adding a chapter and author notes. Happy Monday.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts! Much appreciated.
Comment from equestrik
I like this. It has a feel good vibe and goes perfectly with the art work. I am not sure but feel that flourishing might flow better that flourishes-it just seems to be a better tense.
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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I like this. It has a feel good vibe and goes perfectly with the art work. I am not sure but feel that flourishing might flow better that flourishes-it just seems to be a better tense.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts! Much appreciated.
Comment from Cindy Decker
June,
What an awesome poem, The words feel as they were all carefully chosen; the first line draws the reader in immediately.
The photo is abstract and very relevant to your beautiful poem.
Good luck in the contest,
Cindy
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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June,
What an awesome poem, The words feel as they were all carefully chosen; the first line draws the reader in immediately.
The photo is abstract and very relevant to your beautiful poem.
Good luck in the contest,
Cindy
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts! Much appreciated.
Comment from elchupakabra
This is a cute little piece, I like that you ended it with an alliteration to wrap it up neatly. Great work on this Renga, thank you for sharing and for the added notes :) Later daze.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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This is a cute little piece, I like that you ended it with an alliteration to wrap it up neatly. Great work on this Renga, thank you for sharing and for the added notes :) Later daze.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you! I appreciate your input.