Driving Winding Roads
5-7-5 poem15 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Yes now that's an interesting and explanatory analogy for the Italian terrain and well portrayed here in this 5-7-5 and a great visual to illustrate
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Yes now that's an interesting and explanatory analogy for the Italian terrain and well portrayed here in this 5-7-5 and a great visual to illustrate
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
Comment from Melodie Michelle
I actually get this poem! EXCELLENT piece;-) Perfect 5-7-5!
Short poems usually don't make sense to me but this one is off tha chain!
Thanxxx for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
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I actually get this poem! EXCELLENT piece;-) Perfect 5-7-5!
Short poems usually don't make sense to me but this one is off tha chain!
Thanxxx for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a dun post and a clever few words about Italy and their spaghetti roads through the hills, a fine write and you entertained me here, love Dolly x
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This is a dun post and a clever few words about Italy and their spaghetti roads through the hills, a fine write and you entertained me here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I know exactly what you are talking about; in Romania in the summer you feel like sinking in the hot asphalt. I like your image better :"
Need a strong stomach
motoring Italian alps -
asphalt spaghetti." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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I know exactly what you are talking about; in Romania in the summer you feel like sinking in the hot asphalt. I like your image better :"
Need a strong stomach
motoring Italian alps -
asphalt spaghetti." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
Comment from Ben B.
That last line was pretty clever. Asphalt spaghetti was an acronym for the long winding road around the Italian Alps. That would certainly be an interesting place for a race.
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That last line was pretty clever. Asphalt spaghetti was an acronym for the long winding road around the Italian Alps. That would certainly be an interesting place for a race.
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
