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Renga Multi-Author Book

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Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7

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Comment from Ben B.
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Wow this is a unique feature. I didn't know multi author books were a thing in this website. Thank you for sharing the renga with us, it's an interesting design. As for your couplets it's a nice story. Rather than being a poem about a dragon it shows people having the fighting spirit of one.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    You should make an entry. It is fun. My entry for chapter 45 called ?Lightning? is the best. It is still available for review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Spirit spit fire like a dragon, it's this a mask metaphor for courage? "Spirit soars miles high to sky.
Spit fire like dragon we fight." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    Thanks.