Imagination
Overactive10 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
You've captured beautifully how imagination works. I use to watch lots of horror and thriller type movies years ago. I remember when the movie Halloween first came out. It had me looking under the bed and in closets for a while. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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You've captured beautifully how imagination works. I use to watch lots of horror and thriller type movies years ago. I remember when the movie Halloween first came out. It had me looking under the bed and in closets for a while. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Night of the living dead had me terrified. I saw it at a drive -in movie and my sister drove us through a cemetery right after. I went hysterical. Lately I really haven't been able to sleep and all kinds of things go through my head..oh well. Thank you so much for reading my poem.
Comment from Vera Panera
Great job on painting the picture of the dark and what how our minds go to the worst place possible "monsters my soul will take". I would just challenge you to find an alternative to "ghosts" in the last line instead of repeating it again, maybe "spirits" or even "souls". Good job and good luck!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Great job on painting the picture of the dark and what how our minds go to the worst place possible "monsters my soul will take". I would just challenge you to find an alternative to "ghosts" in the last line instead of repeating it again, maybe "spirits" or even "souls". Good job and good luck!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for the suggestion...I'm going to look it over. :)
Comment from Prakriti2
It is a fun poem. I would love to read you play with the structure and word choices. I think focusing in tiny details around you would make it more interesting. Overall, good work!!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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It is a fun poem. I would love to read you play with the structure and word choices. I think focusing in tiny details around you would make it more interesting. Overall, good work!!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you, that means a lot. :)
Comment from Eternal Muse
Yes, imagination can really play games with us in the dark. Then when the light comes, all goes away like a dream. The sunlight bursts into our room and the visions of the night disappear.
Terrific artistic presentation and artwork.
I wish you luck in that contest, this should do very well.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Yes, imagination can really play games with us in the dark. Then when the light comes, all goes away like a dream. The sunlight bursts into our room and the visions of the night disappear.
Terrific artistic presentation and artwork.
I wish you luck in that contest, this should do very well.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you, that's very nice of you. :)
Comment from RShipp
Enjoyed!!! Loved the picture. I believe that is the bed that I used to sleep in?
I believe you have met the requirements of this contest: Write a short poem, of any type, but with two stanzas only.
Best of luck.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Enjoyed!!! Loved the picture. I believe that is the bed that I used to sleep in?
I believe you have met the requirements of this contest: Write a short poem, of any type, but with two stanzas only.
Best of luck.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this nice review and best wishes. :)
Comment from R. Hiland
Best of show. Good work. Good rhymes, good story. Good luck..........................................................................................
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Best of show. Good work. Good rhymes, good story. Good luck..........................................................................................
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review..it made the rest of my day. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
I have had the same thoughts at night when im all alone and hear a noise! Definitely an overactive imagination! Lol. I love this poem as well as the picture you choose! Worthy of a six star rating! Great work!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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I have had the same thoughts at night when im all alone and hear a noise! Definitely an overactive imagination! Lol. I love this poem as well as the picture you choose! Worthy of a six star rating! Great work!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this fantastic review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
I love this two stanza poem and think it will do very well in the contest. Love your rhyming and presentation. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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I love this two stanza poem and think it will do very well in the contest. Love your rhyming and presentation. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you, you are awesome. I appreciate the 6 stars. :)
Comment from equestrik
This is a clever write. I like how it begins with scary monsters ceated by a child and then the realization of the cat and as the child grew, the monsters were replaced by friendly ghosts.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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This is a clever write. I like how it begins with scary monsters ceated by a child and then the realization of the cat and as the child grew, the monsters were replaced by friendly ghosts.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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It's actually about me..lol. I've been having trouble sleeping lately and I'm a little scared of the dark. But then I start thinking about all the happy family moments I've had in my house and feel better. Any tips on improving my poem? I always welcome them. Thanks for reading.
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I think just keep writing and reading :)
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I really like the meter and rhyme scheme you have used. It is so tight and even, your poem reads beautifully and it's relatable.
Some nights I convince myself there's something lurking in the shadows too! It's always something completely logical though, when I check around (phew!)
I like the balance between your 2 stanzas - the darkness followed by the light.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Hello :)
I really like the meter and rhyme scheme you have used. It is so tight and even, your poem reads beautifully and it's relatable.
Some nights I convince myself there's something lurking in the shadows too! It's always something completely logical though, when I check around (phew!)
I like the balance between your 2 stanzas - the darkness followed by the light.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this nice review and your kind words.
