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Loyalty Pays Off

A 5-7-5 about greatest reward.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Roberta Lawrinsky
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Not to mention that Faith is its own reward even while still on earth. Who wins more when Faith pays off?
God? Or the mortal?
Both! It's a win-win situation, wouldn't you say?

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
    I do agree, it is a win-win situation. Thank you for your comments. Much appreciated.
reply by Roberta Lawrinsky on 12-Aug-2020
    it's a win-win
Comment from lancellot
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Very interesting, isn't that like having double faith. First, faith in God, believing without direct evidence (definition of faith), then, (after you die) believing that you will live forever (I guess resurrected at some point). Again without evidence, and after having died.

Faith is a remarkable thing. I don't begrudge those who have it. It is just amazing.

A good entry.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    Since I won't know anything after I die, for the dead know nothing, I have faith in God now that I shall have eternal life.I do thank you for the review and do greatly appreciate your comments.
Comment from roof35
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You followed the rules and penned an excellent five/seven/five poem. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. This is a powerful message you got across in so few words. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    I greatly appreciate your reviewing, and even more so appreciate your comments.