Comment from palmart

Good

Good word combination and message. Accurate idea helps concentrate in good message. A good message to remember "Perseid" at this time of the year, with nice warm nights as stage.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020

Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

Nice entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows well. The presentation is pretty. I like the satori line... it's clever.... Stream free ;)

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from equestrik

Good

Very cool! I love the pictures, looks like Arizona or New Mexico. I have been out to look but have not yet seen the meteor showers- I am not committed enough it seems to stay up and keep at it!

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

ha, you have a point. In this time when most entertainment is via a streaming service, it is good to know that there is one natural viewing service still free and it has the largest screen every made.

Great idea.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020

I like that idea 'largest screen ever made'- thanks for reviewing zanya