Within the Bone
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "An Oracle"A tale of love, magic, and revenge.
4 total reviews
Comment from AJ McCall
So Mara can break spells? This one is a great continuation of the last chapter. I love trolls, but never never read them written as an oracle. Mara's destiny is interesting, there's hope for her, but not her people? Mysterious indeed. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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So Mara can break spells? This one is a great continuation of the last chapter. I love trolls, but never never read them written as an oracle. Mara's destiny is interesting, there's hope for her, but not her people? Mysterious indeed. Can't wait for the next chapter!
(I'll send the message again.:)
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate it. Kalevi is definitely a dangerous place to go for knowledge, but useful. I'm glad you appreciated his prophecy.
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You're welcome!
Comment from equestrik
The story definitely held my interest and made me want to know more. I thin the writing is descriptive and invites the reader forward into the story-nicely done!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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The story definitely held my interest and made me want to know more. I thin the writing is descriptive and invites the reader forward into the story-nicely done!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for reviewing! I really appreciate the feedback.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Good story! If I had to change something it would be to choose single spacing instead of double spacing;-) Single is easier to follow and to read!
In my opinion the story needed going over once more!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Good story! If I had to change something it would be to choose single spacing instead of double spacing;-) Single is easier to follow and to read!
In my opinion the story needed going over once more!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for reviewing. Once I figure out how to adjust the spacing, I?ll take a look at it.
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I'm sure it's in your settings, if not write to the site but clicking on CONTACT US at the bottom of every page and they will answer you fast;-)
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Oh my, that is some terrifying prophesy Kalevi gave Mara! Can this troll be trusted? And what is he going to ask her to do as payment for his
services? He didn't give me a very hopeful impression, this creep is up to no good!
A well-written chapter.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Oh my, that is some terrifying prophesy Kalevi gave Mara! Can this troll be trusted? And what is he going to ask her to do as payment for his
services? He didn't give me a very hopeful impression, this creep is up to no good!
A well-written chapter.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for reviewing! I?m glad Kalevi came across as creepy as intended.
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Welcome!
