Annual Masterpiece
No two are ever alike...23 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written five-line poem about the four nature seasons we experience each year each season has it special features that makes them unique each year a masterpiece from the creator.
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A very well-written five-line poem about the four nature seasons we experience each year each season has it special features that makes them unique each year a masterpiece from the creator.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your wonderful comments!
Comment from estory
The alliterations you came up with here made the poem in my opinion, you had some nice musical effects there. Also the images of the icicled snow draped world and the shadowed colors of autumn were colorful and vibrant landscapes. estory
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The alliterations you came up with here made the poem in my opinion, you had some nice musical effects there. Also the images of the icicled snow draped world and the shadowed colors of autumn were colorful and vibrant landscapes. estory
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your wonderful comments!
Comment from RShipp
I loved your use of alliteration and your rhyming was perfect.
You have met the requirements of the Four Seasons writing prompt contest: Write a five line poem that somehow incorporates the topic, Seasons.
Best of luck in the Four Seasons writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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I loved your use of alliteration and your rhyming was perfect.
You have met the requirements of the Four Seasons writing prompt contest: Write a five line poem that somehow incorporates the topic, Seasons.
Best of luck in the Four Seasons writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your wonderful comments!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Four Seasons Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Four Seasons Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Although the meter is uneven here I enjoyed the sentiments of each season and you entertained me with the changes in colour and temperature, love Dolly x
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Although the meter is uneven here I enjoyed the sentiments of each season and you entertained me with the changes in colour and temperature, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Dolly!
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you rhymed each line and described each season with lots of artistic imagery and end with "God's studio!" Yes, God is the Artist Who made all the seasons. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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I like how you rhymed each line and described each season with lots of artistic imagery and end with "God's studio!" Yes, God is the Artist Who made all the seasons. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, lyenochka!
Comment from Eternal Muse
You did the four seasons justice with your poem. I absolutely love your descriptive imagery and visuals, your stunning presentation and your rhyming.
Spring splashes bright colors o'er mount and meadow.
Then heat waves of Summer add texture and glow
This made me nostalgic for the 4 seasons as I live in the state now where we don't have all seasons.
This should do great in the contest, good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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You did the four seasons justice with your poem. I absolutely love your descriptive imagery and visuals, your stunning presentation and your rhyming.
Spring splashes bright colors o'er mount and meadow.
Then heat waves of Summer add texture and glow
This made me nostalgic for the 4 seasons as I live in the state now where we don't have all seasons.
This should do great in the contest, good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Eternal Muse!
Comment from Ayan3
It is a great poem ad I really like how you ver very descriptive and rimed all of it perfectly, the transitions were not great so if you change it a little it would be great.
Sincerely,Ayan
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It is a great poem ad I really like how you ver very descriptive and rimed all of it perfectly, the transitions were not great so if you change it a little it would be great.
Sincerely,Ayan
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Ayan!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem has some good rhymes in it. I love the way each line has the same rhyme, yet it does not seem banal or sing-songy. It is a respectable contest entry. Good luck!
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This poem has some good rhymes in it. I love the way each line has the same rhyme, yet it does not seem banal or sing-songy. It is a respectable contest entry. Good luck!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Susan X!
Comment from Ben B.
You've almost got it! I would personally recommend that you switch I would reword that third line to "Summer Waves of heat" to keep the flow of the poem going.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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You've almost got it! I would personally recommend that you switch I would reword that third line to "Summer Waves of heat" to keep the flow of the poem going.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
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