Annual Masterpiece
No two are ever alike...23 total reviews
Comment from elchupakabra
I like the alliterations you used with this piece, it's clear to see why this was the contest winner. Congratulations and excellent work. Thank you for sharing :) Later daze.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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I like the alliterations you used with this piece, it's clear to see why this was the contest winner. Congratulations and excellent work. Thank you for sharing :) Later daze.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much, sir, for dropping by on this one -- you are always so appreciated!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Well that was just BEAUTIFUL. You certainly deserved that win. How wonderful that God created all those seasons for us. The winter one is just wonderful, for the children. But as an elder I no longer appreciate the snow and ice. Too dangerous in my mind.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Well that was just BEAUTIFUL. You certainly deserved that win. How wonderful that God created all those seasons for us. The winter one is just wonderful, for the children. But as an elder I no longer appreciate the snow and ice. Too dangerous in my mind.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you, THANK YOU, Becky, for your wonderful review and those bright stars on this one, my lady -- one of those I 'wrote' in my head as I worked and just stopped long enough to type it in.... Painting door frames in prep for moving has a good side-effect, yeah?! LOL! ;) Take care out there and have a wonderful week - be sure to stop by again sometime...! ;) Yvette
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You sound like my nemisis, but it's hard thinking and painting and stopping to write down those thought while they are still there.
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We teachers have a habit of having pencils/paper pretty handy... ;) :) And I hope not a nemesis... would much more appreciate online friendly correspondence and exchange.. ?? :) :) Hope you have a wonderful evening! ;) Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Yvette.
-Congratulations on the win.
-It is a very good poem with
effective imagery for each season,
as well as rhyme.
-I like the theme of a canvas
in progress as each season
adds its own splash of color.
-Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Yvette.
-Congratulations on the win.
-It is a very good poem with
effective imagery for each season,
as well as rhyme.
-I like the theme of a canvas
in progress as each season
adds its own splash of color.
-Well done!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you, THANK YOU, Pam, for your review on this one, my lady -- one of those I 'wrote' in my head as I worked and just stopped long enough to type it in.... Painting door frames has a good side-effect, yeah?! LOL! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette. I guess you'll have to keep painting, ha, ha.
Comment from trimple
Dear Yvonne
Congratulations on your fine win!
A cracking poem that incorporates every season with such splendid descriptions, it's hardly any wonder you won top prize in this competition.
Lovely to see your writing again having had a long break from the site.
I look forward to reading more :)
Much love
tracey x
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Dear Yvonne
Congratulations on your fine win!
A cracking poem that incorporates every season with such splendid descriptions, it's hardly any wonder you won top prize in this competition.
Lovely to see your writing again having had a long break from the site.
I look forward to reading more :)
Much love
tracey x
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you, THANK YOU, Tracey for your review on this one, my lady -- one of those I 'wrote' in my head as I worked and just stopped long enough to type it in.... Painting door frames has a good side-effect, yeah?! LOL! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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It's a worthy winner!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Your creativity is showing -- and I LOVE it! "God's studio" -- how imaginative. I don't see how a five-linepoem could be more beautiful. Best of luck in the booth!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Your creativity is showing -- and I LOVE it! "God's studio" -- how imaginative. I don't see how a five-linepoem could be more beautiful. Best of luck in the booth!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Dawn, for your review on this 'shortie'... seems that's all I have time for lately - lol!! ;) :) Catchin' up this week, though - Take care of you out there!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Four Seasons writing prompt contest. Good form in accordance to the contest rules. You included them all. I like the presentation too. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Four Seasons writing prompt contest. Good form in accordance to the contest rules. You included them all. I like the presentation too. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much, Gypsy!!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Mystery Writer. I love the feeling, the great rhymes, and the imagery projected from your words. I agree that no two seasons are alike just like fingerprints and snowflakes.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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This is a great contest entry, Mystery Writer. I love the feeling, the great rhymes, and the imagery projected from your words. I agree that no two seasons are alike just like fingerprints and snowflakes.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thanks so very much for your wonderful comments.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Y. M. Roger
Yes there seasons of year are ever alike...
Yes with the way you describe the seasons--
Is a Masterpiece of two artistic forms of art, poetry and gives an image of each season of the year.
Gert
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Hello Y. M. Roger
Yes there seasons of year are ever alike...
Yes with the way you describe the seasons--
Is a Masterpiece of two artistic forms of art, poetry and gives an image of each season of the year.
Gert
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Oh, Gert, you have made my weekend!! :) ;) Thank you, THANK YOU for those lovely stars, my lady - I am so pleased you enjoyed this one! Quick contest entries are what I have time for these days as we're trying to 'downsize' and this 'semblance' of classes started this week... I'm looking forward to a more 'normal routine' really soon!! Take care of you out there and enjoy the remainder of the weekend! ;)
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Smiles you are welcome.
Gert
Comment from Father Flaps
This is a fine entry for the Four Seasons contest, Mystery Poet. You have managed to rhyme every line. I especially like "God's studio".
The only change I would make,
"Each year's a new treasure from God's studio!"
Shouldn't it be,
"Each season's a new treasure from God's studio!"
or, if you'd like some alliteration and better meter,
"Each term's a new treasure from God's studio!" ... term, meaning a period of time.
But I like the way you introduce each season,
"Winter's white canvas"
"Spring splashes bright colors"
"heat waves of Summer"
"Autumn's breeze brushes bold shapes"
Nicely penned! Good Luck in the voting booths.
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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This is a fine entry for the Four Seasons contest, Mystery Poet. You have managed to rhyme every line. I especially like "God's studio".
The only change I would make,
"Each year's a new treasure from God's studio!"
Shouldn't it be,
"Each season's a new treasure from God's studio!"
or, if you'd like some alliteration and better meter,
"Each term's a new treasure from God's studio!" ... term, meaning a period of time.
But I like the way you introduce each season,
"Winter's white canvas"
"Spring splashes bright colors"
"heat waves of Summer"
"Autumn's breeze brushes bold shapes"
Nicely penned! Good Luck in the voting booths.
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I really like this. The added rhyme and flow of this enhances and compliments your well placed words. Thanks for sharing this well thought out and well written work. I enjoyed reading it! Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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I really like this. The added rhyme and flow of this enhances and compliments your well placed words. Thanks for sharing this well thought out and well written work. I enjoyed reading it! Well done!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your wonderful comments, Jeffrey!
