The Old Owl Speaks Its Mind
5-7-5 (Perched above us all)6 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Simply superb poem for the witty animal contest and what more witty animal can there be on the planet than the 'wizen owl' who 'pontificates'- has my vote - should cross the finish line !!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
Simply superb poem for the witty animal contest and what more witty animal can there be on the planet than the 'wizen owl' who 'pontificates'- has my vote - should cross the finish line !!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Zanya,
I hope your vote puts me on the podium. Then, I really will whoo or hoot (-;
Comment from RShipp
You have completed the requirements for this contest: Write a 5-7-5 syllable poem concerning a witty animal contest. The punnier, the funnier.
Best of luck.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
You have completed the requirements for this contest: Write a 5-7-5 syllable poem concerning a witty animal contest. The punnier, the funnier.
Best of luck.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your stars and wishes for the contest voting!
Comment from tempeste
This is a brilliant entry for this contest..
I read this before it hit the booth , when it was still listed on the contest page and I already knew then I was going to give it my vote ( you have two now )
couldn't believe my eyes when I checked your portfolio last night and saw you were the author.
( laugh)
The owl figure is my town's symbol.
The owl is depicted with an open umbrella in honour of our Museum ..the only one in the world devoted exclusively to umbrellas and parasols. ( from 1800 onwards)
The noble owl is an old and wise creature .. and I can see why he doesn't care a hoot by now about us ..
mankind will time again make the same mistakes .. the shenanigans never end ..
this tug of war between America and China is going to finish bad and the repercussions will be worldwide ..
The double meaning of HOOT is the cherry on the cake ..
yes I know in English it's ....icing ....but in Italian we say :
ciliegina sulla torta..tiny cherry on the cake ( biggrin)
If any entry deserved a 6 star vote , then this is the one . Love the artwork.
Ciao Marco!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
This is a brilliant entry for this contest..
I read this before it hit the booth , when it was still listed on the contest page and I already knew then I was going to give it my vote ( you have two now )
couldn't believe my eyes when I checked your portfolio last night and saw you were the author.
( laugh)
The owl figure is my town's symbol.
The owl is depicted with an open umbrella in honour of our Museum ..the only one in the world devoted exclusively to umbrellas and parasols. ( from 1800 onwards)
The noble owl is an old and wise creature .. and I can see why he doesn't care a hoot by now about us ..
mankind will time again make the same mistakes .. the shenanigans never end ..
this tug of war between America and China is going to finish bad and the repercussions will be worldwide ..
The double meaning of HOOT is the cherry on the cake ..
yes I know in English it's ....icing ....but in Italian we say :
ciliegina sulla torta..tiny cherry on the cake ( biggrin)
If any entry deserved a 6 star vote , then this is the one . Love the artwork.
Ciao Marco!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Tempeste,
So pleased that you recognized my poem and for your vote. ?Minha espousa? thought the owl artwork was fantastic too and really liked my verse.
Ate proxima vez!
Comment from mauial
Good job with the last line. An owl hoots and I don't give a hoot as the last line is funny for a wise one who pontificates, meaning he thinks deep on the matter.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
Good job with the last line. An owl hoots and I don't give a hoot as the last line is funny for a wise one who pontificates, meaning he thinks deep on the matter.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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My owl is a wizen old coot; he could care less what his fellow forest friends think of him (-;
Thanks for your review and stars for my 5-7-5 type verse.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I often think that birds don't think much of humans and live in their world in the skies away from us and think we are such fools for not being able to fly like they do, your words here confirmed my thoughts, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
I often think that birds don't think much of humans and live in their world in the skies away from us and think we are such fools for not being able to fly like they do, your words here confirmed my thoughts, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thanks Dolly,
Hope you are healthy and safe on your Isle. Thanks, as, always for your starry review.
Love back to you too!
Comment from trimple
Hello there, Mystery writer.
This a perfect submission to this witty animal contest.
Given the dramatic humanic scenes across the world right now, I can't say as I blame him :)
Wise indeed, unlike the rest of the world going bonkers...
I wish you luck in the contest
much love
trimple
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
Hello there, Mystery writer.
This a perfect submission to this witty animal contest.
Given the dramatic humanic scenes across the world right now, I can't say as I blame him :)
Wise indeed, unlike the rest of the world going bonkers...
I wish you luck in the contest
much love
trimple
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Trimple!
Thanks for your enthusiasm for my contest entry. Some of our politicians do pontificate but expel a lot of bad gas at the same time (-;
I appreciate your review and stars.
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My pleasure