Small Talk
I Am Not Perfect Contest Entry12 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this made me smile as we try to show a fake interest in someone's baby pictures or enthusiasm for their football team. Where I worked, it was all about the work and private home life was kept strictly hidden, a well rhymed poem with a clever message, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Ha ha ha, this made me smile as we try to show a fake interest in someone's baby pictures or enthusiasm for their football team. Where I worked, it was all about the work and private home life was kept strictly hidden, a well rhymed poem with a clever message, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Dolly. I really appreciate the gracious stars. Yeah, sometimes we just have to grin and bear it. lol I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. I hope you have a great weekend. Thank you again.
Comment from royowen
What an excellent entry in this contest, with the perfect ballad, the narrative flows as smooth as silk, the flow and sense of humour are the perfect fit, and this is a marvellous competitor. I don't think you could have done, better. Written in 8686 stanzas and abcb rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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What an excellent entry in this contest, with the perfect ballad, the narrative flows as smooth as silk, the flow and sense of humour are the perfect fit, and this is a marvellous competitor. I don't think you could have done, better. Written in 8686 stanzas and abcb rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Wow. Thank you for the fantastic review, Roy. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind comments. I'm glad you like this silly piece. I hope you have a great weekend and thank you again.
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Well done
