Small Talk
I Am Not Perfect Contest Entry12 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the kids perfections we all have. When we are at our workplace there is no time or a reason to interact with small talk, and no one needs to know your personal business.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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A very well-written poem about the kids perfections we all have. When we are at our workplace there is no time or a reason to interact with small talk, and no one needs to know your personal business.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. I really appreciate the generous stars. Sorry about the late reply. My internet has been down for a few days. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a wonderful day.
Ron
Comment from Ideasaregems-Dawn
AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Oh my God!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Yes, I really am laughing that hard -- my face hurts from smiling so widely!!!! Shame on you!!!! HAHAHAHA!
All kidding aside, this is hilarious! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! I wish I still had a six left -- it deserves that rating. Even the GIF you chose is perfect. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Oh my God!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Yes, I really am laughing that hard -- my face hurts from smiling so widely!!!! Shame on you!!!! HAHAHAHA!
All kidding aside, this is hilarious! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! I wish I still had a six left -- it deserves that rating. Even the GIF you chose is perfect. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and big six star offer, Dawn. Sorry about the late reply. My internet has been down for a few days. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a couple of chuckles over this silly piece. Have yourself a great day.
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Ron
Comment from RShipp
You have shared your 'flaw' with precision and humor. Great job!
You have met the requirements of this contest: Write a poem about a flaw that you see in yourself.
Best of luck in the "I Am Not Perfect" writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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You have shared your 'flaw' with precision and humor. Great job!
You have met the requirements of this contest: Write a poem about a flaw that you see in yourself.
Best of luck in the "I Am Not Perfect" writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the awesome review and giant sixer, friend. I was just in one of those moods. lol Sorry I couldn't get back to you quicker because I haven't had an internet connection in a few days. I really appreciate the fantastic rating. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Mia Twysted
This poem makes me think of my husband. He is not much of a chit chatter and when people start talking to him he inches away little by little trying to escape.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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This poem makes me think of my husband. He is not much of a chit chatter and when people start talking to him he inches away little by little trying to escape.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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lol I do that, too. Thank you for the fantastic review, Mia. Sorry about the late reply. My internet has been down for a few days. I really appreciate the generous stars. I hope you have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Wow! This poem is a highly descriptive, pull-no-punches explanation of how you feel about people who might try to talk to you! Hey, did you just yawn!? I'm guessing you're not on Facebook. Well, I'm not either.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Wow! This poem is a highly descriptive, pull-no-punches explanation of how you feel about people who might try to talk to you! Hey, did you just yawn!? I'm guessing you're not on Facebook. Well, I'm not either.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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lol Yeah, I stay far away from Facebook and all those other chit chat sites. Thank you for the great review and generous stars. Sorry about the late reply. My internet has been down for a few days. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. Thank you again.
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Ron
Comment from trimple
Hello there Nystery writer.
Oh I just cracked up reading this. :)
I have a great book that I think you'll love. It's by Howard Jacobson and the tile of this hilarious book is called: What ever it is, I don't like it.
Very ticklish and with super meter throughout.
I wish you luck in the contest
much love
trimple
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Hello there Nystery writer.
Oh I just cracked up reading this. :)
I have a great book that I think you'll love. It's by Howard Jacobson and the tile of this hilarious book is called: What ever it is, I don't like it.
Very ticklish and with super meter throughout.
I wish you luck in the contest
much love
trimple
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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lol I'll have to look that book up. It sounds like it's right down my alley. Sorry about the late reply. My internet has been down for a few days. Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Tracey. I'm glad you had a chuckle with this silliness.
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Ron
Comment from Dick Narvett
A well-written, in-your-face, tell-it-like-it-is poem. I see a little of myself in this one. Not necessarily a loner, but one who tends to be a bit more cerebral and doesn't see much value in "surface" relationships. A good entry.
Dick
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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A well-written, in-your-face, tell-it-like-it-is poem. I see a little of myself in this one. Not necessarily a loner, but one who tends to be a bit more cerebral and doesn't see much value in "surface" relationships. A good entry.
Dick
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Dick. Yeah, I just feel like this sometimes. Sorry about the late reply. My internet has been down for a few days. I appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I think there are definitely some days when we don't feel like interacting with people at all, I must confess that I find small-talk quite tedious. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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I think there are definitely some days when we don't feel like interacting with people at all, I must confess that I find small-talk quite tedious. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Jacob. Sorry about the late reply. My internet has been down for a few days. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I hope you have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
How many times can I say in one review that I enjoyed myself? That you take the words out of my mouth? six times? Just once? A hundred? You probably won't give a damn. so let me only say that I regret not having any more sixes this week.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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How many times can I say in one review that I enjoyed myself? That you take the words out of my mouth? six times? Just once? A hundred? You probably won't give a damn. so let me only say that I regret not having any more sixes this week.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and sixer wishes, Marjon. Sorry about the late reply. My internet has been down for a few days. I really appreciate the kind comments. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. Hope you have a wonderful day.
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Ron
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Welcome! I liked the piece enormously.
Comment from LisaMay
Fair comment - small talk is a waste of space for me as well. You've put your case in a very entertaining manner, in perfect rhyme and rhythm. I especially like this: "the last dang thing I want to hear
is work crap while at work."
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Fair comment - small talk is a waste of space for me as well. You've put your case in a very entertaining manner, in perfect rhyme and rhythm. I especially like this: "the last dang thing I want to hear
is work crap while at work."
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Hey, Lisa, hi. Sorry about the late reply. My internet has been down for a few days. Yeah, that really bugs me when I'm at work and people want to talk to me about work. lol Thank you for the fantastic review and stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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Ron