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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Your "news" reports are so well written readers will think they are true! ha ha
Noticed two typos:
3rd para.:The eruption sent three people to the hospital suffering from aspiration pneumonia, left 17 coated in a green slimly (slimy) layer dying (dyeing) their skin,
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Your "news" reports are so well written readers will think they are true! ha ha
Noticed two typos:
3rd para.:The eruption sent three people to the hospital suffering from aspiration pneumonia, left 17 coated in a green slimly (slimy) layer dying (dyeing) their skin,
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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I am so glad you liked it. I took a newspaper writing class in college. Glad to know it was useful.
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Wow!
Comment from Mistydawn
This is too funny, Mia. Green with envy for sure, lol. The way the guy talks it might just happen again. Think he needs to use his brain for other things instead of getting high. He did partially succeed. He got a great portion of the campus stoned, lol. Gave the students a new look in the process. Thanks for the laugh.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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This is too funny, Mia. Green with envy for sure, lol. The way the guy talks it might just happen again. Think he needs to use his brain for other things instead of getting high. He did partially succeed. He got a great portion of the campus stoned, lol. Gave the students a new look in the process. Thanks for the laugh.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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It just might happen again. lol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(typos: students skin s/b students; dying s/b dyeing; slimly s/b slimy--combined several chemicals--OMIT once fused together) Very clever--love the wry humor ... for patent reasons! Cheers. LIZ
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(typos: students skin s/b students; dying s/b dyeing; slimly s/b slimy--combined several chemicals--OMIT once fused together) Very clever--love the wry humor ... for patent reasons! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank for finding the errors. I am so glad you liked it.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yup funny indeed Chao expert in weeds, and students eager to try the crazy experiment. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter and with other literary endeavours.
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Yup funny indeed Chao expert in weeds, and students eager to try the crazy experiment. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter and with other literary endeavours.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from lancellot
Ha, I love this school, and this news report. The name killed me: We take anyone city college. It is funny because it's true. Those student and faculty responses are classic. Chao, is going to get everyone high again, when tey shed their green skin and recover.
Funny as hell.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Ha, I love this school, and this news report. The name killed me: We take anyone city college. It is funny because it's true. Those student and faculty responses are classic. Chao, is going to get everyone high again, when tey shed their green skin and recover.
Funny as hell.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it. Keep your eye out for the next one coming soon.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
EXCELLENT story! The unique characters interact with one another nicely and the storyline is creative and interesting;-)
Thank you for sharing;-)
God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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EXCELLENT story! The unique characters interact with one another nicely and the storyline is creative and interesting;-)
Thank you for sharing;-)
God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you.
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;-)
