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Renga Multi-Author Book

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Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7

7 total reviews 
Comment from karenina
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Cannot get more creative and original than this little cutie...and the multi-colored font adds to the effect! There is a touch of whimsy about this that endears it to me. Very nice--Karenina

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much, girl...you are a glutton for punishment LOL

    hugs,
    gypsy
Comment from kahpot
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Very well said, imagination and creation do go hand in hand, I am really enjoying these poems that many are contributing to, very well done and thank you for sharing****kahpot

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
    and valuable feedback. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

Quite the rainbow infused words you created for this renga segment! The overall magical presentation is imaginative and creative. Your artwork just adds to the joy of reading your 7-7 couplet.

Mark

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words :)
    when are you going to add a chapter?

    hugs,

    gypsy
reply by Mark D. R. on 07-Aug-2020
    Maybe before your saga ends (-;
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
    Is 100 chapters :)
Comment from lightink
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Lovely way of describing the writing process - tying together the what happens on the inside and how that manifest on the outside (creating). I can't believe the magic you did with your colors! It must have took forever! Beautiful, inside and out!

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your time and kind words.

    Hugs,

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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Enjoyed the colorful presentation and the focus on the "inside imagination" and the celebration of creativity. Great follow-up to Lucy's haiku in your renga book. Only in your notes, the hyperlink is click-able.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Oh, really? That's weird. Did you try saving the post before you try the link? Please let me know.

    Thank you very much!
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Gypsy--I find that beer helps also, you might write crap, but you THINK you're creating a masterpiece never before seen--maybe that's just me?

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind feedback,

    cheers,
    gypsy
Comment from June Sargent
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A creative imagination can lead us in many different directions. Will see where future posts take us! Great follow up that offers a world of possibilities.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind feedback,

    cheers,
    gypsy