Wax Seal
Deep Secret /Short story2 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Interesting. Must agree with the old saying about from out of babes. Amazing how children can control us old GRANDPAS.
Thanks for sharing.
I never found any mistakes.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Interesting. Must agree with the old saying about from out of babes. Amazing how children can control us old GRANDPAS.
Thanks for sharing.
I never found any mistakes.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an excellent contest entry meeting all the requirements. We know there is a secret and we then find out what it is. What I don't get is why Grandpa was not upset that his secret had been forced out of him. His jauntiness did not seem realistic.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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This is an excellent contest entry meeting all the requirements. We know there is a secret and we then find out what it is. What I don't get is why Grandpa was not upset that his secret had been forced out of him. His jauntiness did not seem realistic.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
