Bear Not False Witness
5-7-5 Horror Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- heck of an implication there... ;) :) Definitely a great offering to convey 'horrorific' in but seventeen syllables - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Wow -- heck of an implication there... ;) :) Definitely a great offering to convey 'horrorific' in but seventeen syllables - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Yvette. Yeah, I just wanted to take child abuse one step further into horror. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. I appreciate the stars and comments. Have a great upcoming weekend.
Ron
Comment from Susan X Smith
Shades of child abuse are referenced in this short horrific poem. Who knows why murderers do what they do. Is it something that happened in childhood? This is an excellent contest entry.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Shades of child abuse are referenced in this short horrific poem. Who knows why murderers do what they do. Is it something that happened in childhood? This is an excellent contest entry.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Susan. Who ever knows what sparks off a killer's mind? I really appreciate the generous stars. I hope you have a wonderful night.
Comment from To Write Is To Live
Chilling, frightening, a sudden denouement at the end that stops the reader cold and invites a re-read of the poem to grasp the unintended lesson taught by a man who betrays high trust!
Excellent work!
Thank you for writing and sharing, "Bear Not False Witness."
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Chilling, frightening, a sudden denouement at the end that stops the reader cold and invites a re-read of the poem to grasp the unintended lesson taught by a man who betrays high trust!
Excellent work!
Thank you for writing and sharing, "Bear Not False Witness."
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the awesome review, Write. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you got this dark piece. I hope you have a great day. Thanks again.