Reviews from
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Felix a Coluratura Cat"
All About Our Pets and Other Animals
2 total reviews
Comment from
Barb Hensongispsaca
You have been judged by the best of the singing beasts. They not only sing but purr their songs to us when we listen. Very nicely done. I would check the paragraphs and allow the computer to return on its own, that way the (.) would not be on a line by itself.
had (gotten) unless you are using British english
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
Dear Barbara, Thank you for your review and the five stars. Felix was a unique creature in many ways. Thoughts of him and his doings still
intrigue my waking moments, usually bringing with them a sweet, if slightly sad sense of times past and gone forever. Still he was here once upon a time and he was my cat for more than 16 happy years
cheers Cass
Comment from
Andrelyn Izquierdo
It sounds like Felix has many more sounds and expressions to share in additional upcoming stories. This was a fun snippet of an good day. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
Dear Andrelyn, Thank you for your review and the four stars. Felix was a unique creature, as you would discover if you read his first two stories in my portfolio. He was wise, clever and farsighted. He went deaf when he was old, so he tried always be where he could see me in case there was a morsel of food going free, needing a mouth to swallow it. With three other brethren he had to take his turn, but it ended up on his saucer more often than not. cheers Cass
reply by Andrelyn Izquierdo on 05-Aug-2020
You're very welcome. He's still such a lovable character. :)
-1- Next Page
The FanStory Store For Writers
Shop unique products for writers.
Shop here.
Get a mug, sweatshirt or tee customized with your poem! Yes, your poem on a
Mug |
Sweatshirt |
Tee