Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
An intriguing offering for the contest, although I'm not quite sure of the overall message here... improving a mask? dying to bask (in what? light? honor? glory?)... I would suggestion that the excessive capitalization in this limited format is a bit distracting and the use of the question marks leaves the reader wondering their implication...? Thanx for sharing and best of luck...
If your Dying to Bask? --> If you're dying to bask?
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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An intriguing offering for the contest, although I'm not quite sure of the overall message here... improving a mask? dying to bask (in what? light? honor? glory?)... I would suggestion that the excessive capitalization in this limited format is a bit distracting and the use of the question marks leaves the reader wondering their implication...? Thanx for sharing and best of luck...
If your Dying to Bask? --> If you're dying to bask?
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the Review, this piece by your review hits it's intent.
It's Really just to make people bring forth their own conclusions.
Caps are Just for emphasis. Blessings
Comment from amada
You wrote here a very good poem for this contest of saying something meaningful in only 15syllables. I think that the line "Improve One's Mas" has an enigmatic tone. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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You wrote here a very good poem for this contest of saying something meaningful in only 15syllables. I think that the line "Improve One's Mas" has an enigmatic tone. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you and God's Protection Be With us All during this Covid-19 Outbreak. It was sort of inspired by hearing about a politician dying here in the U.S. after attending a political party rally.