Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "A New Day"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
11 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Everything to love about this--perfect word choices, perfect image... Serenity in a poem looks exactly like this! I could smell the fresh air and imagine the possibilities of a new day!--Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Everything to love about this--perfect word choices, perfect image... Serenity in a poem looks exactly like this! I could smell the fresh air and imagine the possibilities of a new day!--Karenina
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much, Karenina, wow...you read a bunch of my poems, I appreciate it very much. :)
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These special moments are captured within your words here and I love this part of the day that seems so innocent and positive, nature knows how to thrive, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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These special moments are captured within your words here and I love this part of the day that seems so innocent and positive, nature knows how to thrive, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and six stars....you are very kind.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written two line 7/7 poem about the birds chirping in the old orchard to announce the sun will rise soon to start a new day and everyone should start waking up.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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A very well-written two line 7/7 poem about the birds chirping in the old orchard to announce the sun will rise soon to start a new day and everyone should start waking up.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you
Comment from kahpot
A wonderful follow on from Junes 5-7-5, I like the way the theme/subject seems to stay the same but what happens around it can continually change, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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A wonderful follow on from Junes 5-7-5, I like the way the theme/subject seems to stay the same but what happens around it can continually change, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much, Kym, I appreciate your time and review.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Gloria ....
Your renga book is coming right along. This couplet adds an uplifting note of newness found among the old.
Overall great tone and serene presentation.
A most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Your renga book is coming right along. This couplet adds an uplifting note of newness found among the old.
Overall great tone and serene presentation.
A most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Hello my friend, thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Do like your OLD orchard and NEW day contrast in your renga post.
One really can't tell from the photo if it is sunrise or sunset - LOL. Regardless, it fits nicely with your thought.
Mark
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Gypsy,
Do like your OLD orchard and NEW day contrast in your renga post.
One really can't tell from the photo if it is sunrise or sunset - LOL. Regardless, it fits nicely with your thought.
Mark
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Hello my friend, thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Ulla
Hola, Marival, your 7-7 couplet is lovely to read and follows up on the last 5-7-5 by June Sargent. Now it's up to the next writer to continue the theme in 5-7-5 poem. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Hola, Marival, your 7-7 couplet is lovely to read and follows up on the last 5-7-5 by June Sargent. Now it's up to the next writer to continue the theme in 5-7-5 poem. Ulla xx
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Hello my friend, thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
A wonderful 7/7 response to June's post dear Gypsy, it's a great response, I'm so glad it's still going, it gives wings to one's imagination, and will be fascinating to read at its conclusion, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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A wonderful 7/7 response to June's post dear Gypsy, it's a great response, I'm so glad it's still going, it gives wings to one's imagination, and will be fascinating to read at its conclusion, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Hello my friend, thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from June Sargent
GREAT couplet to follow up on my haiku! I love cherry blossoms - a symbol of new beginnings. I'm so glad we are back on track. Thank you for adding to the book with such a lovely image of hope.
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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GREAT couplet to follow up on my haiku! I love cherry blossoms - a symbol of new beginnings. I'm so glad we are back on track. Thank you for adding to the book with such a lovely image of hope.
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Hello my friend, thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, love it! Your link to June's poem are the cherry trees. And your bring in the optimism of a fresh new day in your 7-7! I like how you added her poem at the beginning of your notes.
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Ah, love it! Your link to June's poem are the cherry trees. And your bring in the optimism of a fresh new day in your 7-7! I like how you added her poem at the beginning of your notes.
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Hello my friend, thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy