Trapped
Mental Breakdown9 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Great entry for the
5-7-5 Horror writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the presentation.
Good job.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Hello, my friend,
Great entry for the
5-7-5 Horror writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the presentation.
Good job.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your encouragement.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
The unseen has got to be the scariest of all... ;) :) Definitely a great offering to convey 'horrorific' in but seventeen syllables - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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The unseen has got to be the scariest of all... ;) :) Definitely a great offering to convey 'horrorific' in but seventeen syllables - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouragement.
Comment from Mia Twysted
There is so much said in this piece, at leat to me. We trap ourselves in our minds never leaving a trail on how to return. Things throughout life will follow us and torment us. They are the "ghostly shadows" and they mean to haunt you.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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There is so much said in this piece, at leat to me. We trap ourselves in our minds never leaving a trail on how to return. Things throughout life will follow us and torment us. They are the "ghostly shadows" and they mean to haunt you.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Yes absolutely. Thank you so much for your encouragement.
Comment from mauial
Good poem for the prompt with the horror of mental disease. Sadly I knew a very talented young man with a mental disease, who hung himself in despair when his therapist told him that he couldn't help him anymore.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Good poem for the prompt with the horror of mental disease. Sadly I knew a very talented young man with a mental disease, who hung himself in despair when his therapist told him that he couldn't help him anymore.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Oh no! I?m so sad to hear this. I?m a therapist and we should never do that to a client seeking help. I almost had a mental breakdown once. Very scary place to be. Thank you so much for your encouragement and your understanding of the topic.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a horror deluxe entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish you the best of good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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This is a horror deluxe entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish you the best of good luck!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the encouragement. I appreciate the review so much.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Quite real your poem, this is how our thoughts are trapped inside our minds. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Quite real your poem, this is how our thoughts are trapped inside our minds. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Yes ma?am. Thank you so much. I?ve felt that way many times. I appreciate your review and the encouragement.
Comment from LisaMay
Yes, I agree, that would be really scary. I've never had a mental breakdown, but you've captured the feeling of one in a very believable manner, from your picture choice to your chilling words: " Ghostly shadows loom inside".
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Yes, I agree, that would be really scary. I've never had a mental breakdown, but you've captured the feeling of one in a very believable manner, from your picture choice to your chilling words: " Ghostly shadows loom inside".
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I can scary close once. Never forgot. I appreciate your encouragement.
Comment from Earl Corp
Your poem brings out an excellent point, what are catatonic and comatose people thinking? I know it's difficult writing a 5-7-5 poem that makes sense, so kudos for that. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Your poem brings out an excellent point, what are catatonic and comatose people thinking? I know it's difficult writing a 5-7-5 poem that makes sense, so kudos for that. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your encouragement.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a different type of "horror" than what we would ordinarily expect. Still, it works well as an excellent contest entry. It sets an atmosphere which is somewhat ominous.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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This is a different type of "horror" than what we would ordinarily expect. Still, it works well as an excellent contest entry. It sets an atmosphere which is somewhat ominous.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate the encouragement.