Mother's warmth
3/5/3 poem3 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely response to the contest's challenge. I would suggest the first word to be " it's " for the contraction of "it is" and not "its" which is the possessive. Yes, a mother's love is critical in the character development of the child.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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A lovely response to the contest's challenge. I would suggest the first word to be " it's " for the contraction of "it is" and not "its" which is the possessive. Yes, a mother's love is critical in the character development of the child.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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I thank you my friend, appreciate the time and the correction.
Comment from lancellot
I see, in this poem passion is equal in definition to love or compassion or even responsibility. I see how at times as in this case, it encompasses Nature's basic drive for mother and child.
Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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I see, in this poem passion is equal in definition to love or compassion or even responsibility. I see how at times as in this case, it encompasses Nature's basic drive for mother and child.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Hello friend, I thank you for your time and the wonderful review.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem has spiritual overtones but it also could be understood in a more general sense although the accompanying image is religious. The message is conveyed clearly in a few syllables.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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This poem has spiritual overtones but it also could be understood in a more general sense although the accompanying image is religious. The message is conveyed clearly in a few syllables.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Hello friend, I thank you for your time and the wonderful review.