A Labyrinth Walk
Brings me to serenity.....15 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Writer what a serene piece of writing and the white rose suggests pure peace and tranquility, pureness and selflessness. I love this piece. God bless
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Writer what a serene piece of writing and the white rose suggests pure peace and tranquility, pureness and selflessness. I love this piece. God bless
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for this exceptional rating and your lovely comments. Hope you are well and safe....Maria
Comment from equestrik
First let me applaud you for your work with addicts. That is a tough and often heart breaking job. I enjoyed the poem here as it alludes to the walk giving peace even though flooded with discord.
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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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First let me applaud you for your work with addicts. That is a tough and often heart breaking job. I enjoyed the poem here as it alludes to the walk giving peace even though flooded with discord.
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and your comments. Thank you
also for the compliment. Being an Addiction Counselor was my part
time career. I found it to be challenging yet the most meaningful and
rewarding work I have ever done. Have a great week!.....Maria
Comment from Earl Corp
I'm not usually a tanka fan but yours is different. I imagined taking a walk after an argument to seek some peace and solitude. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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I'm not usually a tanka fan but yours is different. I imagined taking a walk after an argument to seek some peace and solitude. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great
comments. Your comment is exactly what it is like when you walk a
Labyrinth. Have a great week!.....Maria
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tanka about the path we walk with God allow us to open our hearts and thoughts to God and He gives us comfort and truth to handle our problems and gives us peace in our minds.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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A very well-written Tanka about the path we walk with God allow us to open our hearts and thoughts to God and He gives us comfort and truth to handle our problems and gives us peace in our minds.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your lovely
comments.
I hope you are doing well - have a great weekend!.....Maria
Comment from Janet Foor
A walk through flowers and especially a rose garden always brings me peace as well.
A lovely tanka accompanied by a lovely picture.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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A walk through flowers and especially a rose garden always brings me peace as well.
A lovely tanka accompanied by a lovely picture.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and lovely comments.
I am so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Hope you are having a great day!.....Maria
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this poem that seems to be speaking of bringing your thoughts to God and allowing him to help you sort out the lies and negative thoughts that we have to deal with in this life. I like how you emerge from this walk with greater peace. Bill
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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I like this poem that seems to be speaking of bringing your thoughts to God and allowing him to help you sort out the lies and negative thoughts that we have to deal with in this life. I like how you emerge from this walk with greater peace. Bill
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your exceptional
comments. You were able to understand exactly want I was trying
to convey. Hope you are you are having a great day!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The conclusion of your poem is after walking through the tribulation of life, at the end the goal is: " The walk floods my soul with peace " Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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The conclusion of your poem is after walking through the tribulation of life, at the end the goal is: " The walk floods my soul with peace " Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for excellent review and your lovely comments.
Hope you are having a great day!
Comment from kiwisteveh
I appreciate the idea of a walk in nature bringing peace and communion with God, but I do wonder about the order and arrangement of your lines here.
Line 4 Statements are filled with discord came as a shock, since it seemed you were already well into the peace-bringing walk. I would consider re-arranging so that line is near the beginning of your piece.
Steve
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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I appreciate the idea of a walk in nature bringing peace and communion with God, but I do wonder about the order and arrangement of your lines here.
Line 4 Statements are filled with discord came as a shock, since it seemed you were already well into the peace-bringing walk. I would consider re-arranging so that line is near the beginning of your piece.
Steve
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review and your great comments. In
answer to your question: The Labyrinth Walk is a place for me
where I bring my thoughts and concerns. When I get to the center I let go and release them. For me it is there I find God's peace....
Comment from l.raven
Hi sweet girl, what a beautifully written poem Maria...
my favorite flower is a rose...they have a majestic beauty
to them...one that can be seen in so many words...so very nicely written my sweet friend...and I love your stunning picture...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Hi sweet girl, what a beautifully written poem Maria...
my favorite flower is a rose...they have a majestic beauty
to them...one that can be seen in so many words...so very nicely written my sweet friend...and I love your stunning picture...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your lovely
comments. Linda may you stay well and safe.....Maria
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your so welcome my sweet friend...and you stay safe and be well...God Bless...love you...xxoo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, thought-provoking tanka conveys a powerful message about those peaceful walks, a necessity for us when we want to scape the "discord" of the day's statements.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Your well-written, thought-provoking tanka conveys a powerful message about those peaceful walks, a necessity for us when we want to scape the "discord" of the day's statements.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your lovely
comments. Hope you are having a great day!.....Maria
