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Spot On Passion

3-5-3 Passion poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is a short and sweet little piece and a respectable contest entry. I especially like the last line. The background color and image work well, too. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
    Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from mermaids
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Excellent use of the 3-5-3 form. Passion is felt and seen in your little poem. Your poem might also be perfect for a greeting card. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
    Thanks and thank you for the support! I'm glad you enjoyed it!