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Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Welcome to My Heaven!"Children Stories from the Heart.
2 total reviews
Comment from Melodie Michelle
EXCELLENT story! The storyline is scary, creative and interesting;-) Your characters are likeable and they interact well together;-)
I appreciate and thank you for sharing this amazing piece;-)
May God bless you;-)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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EXCELLENT story! The storyline is scary, creative and interesting;-) Your characters are likeable and they interact well together;-)
I appreciate and thank you for sharing this amazing piece;-)
May God bless you;-)
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thanks again to in a row?
Well that means I must be doing something right here?
Ricky
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Comment from Ben B.
Sounds like your character is on the path of becoming a psycho path. I can't say I'm too crazy about what he did to that beaver it was cruel. You may want to reread some of your sentences they sound a little chopped up. Unless of course you wanted it that way.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Sounds like your character is on the path of becoming a psycho path. I can't say I'm too crazy about what he did to that beaver it was cruel. You may want to reread some of your sentences they sound a little chopped up. Unless of course you wanted it that way.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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I always look forward to these four star reviews.
Doctor Ricky 1024