Reviews from

Time

For the one I love for all time.

33 total reviews 
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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It seems that we never have enough time to spend with the ones we want to. I find that time speeds up when I'm with them. We're always having fun and lose track of time and before we know it hours have passed. You did a great job.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
    You are exactly right. There never seems to be enough time to spend with my husband and my family. Thank you so much for your kind review and blessings to you always, Sally XOs....
Comment from A. Willow Bends
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Oh my gosh! I hope you make him a Valentine Card with this on it! This is so very sweet! Love it. I rarely do sixes on the short stuff, but this is ever so worthy and touching! :)
Wendy

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, Wendy dear. I'm delighted you enjoyed this. I will take your great advice. I typically make Jackson a card.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs...xo....
Comment from Ronni
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Hi dear Sally,
Positively love that last phrase! So perfect and says it all so
compellingly, romantically and nostalgically in this 4 line poem!
Love the pic too dear! Best of luck in contest!
Love, blessings, Ronni

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review, dear Ronni. I did make honorable mention. Thank you and bless you. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs....
Comment from lyenochka
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Wow! I love that last line. The middle lines show us our familiar experience with time. But that it stands still when you are with your beloved shows the great connection you two have. Best wishes in the contest!!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind compliments. Both are so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always, Helen dear.
    Sal XOs....
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Ooooo, me likee the romantic reference of time perception here, Lady Sal! ;) Would make a wonderful multi-page (one for each line) Hallmark card, yeah?! ;) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your time and for the marvelous review, dear Yvette. Blessings always,
    Sal XOs....
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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Sally:

You selected two of more all-time favorite songs to go with this
wonderful poem, especially "Time in a Bottle." This just might be
one of the best love poems I have ever read. Good luck in the
contest.

Rdfrdmom2

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your wonderful review and kimd comments, dear. Both are greatly appreciated.
    Sending along my very best,
    Sal XOs...
Comment from Sugarray77
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Oh I love this romantic verse that is packed with meaning. Great job on construction with this format... I know it will do well. I hope you are enjoying a lovely day, sweet Sal!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review, dear Melissa. I appreciate your sweet compliments and support of my poetry. Sending you my best and blessings,
    Sal XOs....
Comment from poetwatch
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Time is on our side, don't you realize by looking into love's eyes? Sally, you are reminiscing or playing those oldies but goodies from our era of love. :) This is a good love offering for the Four Line Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
    I'm glad you enjoyed this and the music from our era. Great stuff. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xo
Comment from Judy Lawless
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This is beautiful, Sally! So simply said and yet so heart-felt and hitting the point home. The photo is amazingly perfect too. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for the lovely review, dear Judy. I wrote this many months ago and had almost forgotten about it untill I saw all these four line poems pop up. I like this style very much. I just celebrated my 45th wedding anniversary in December. It's always so easy to write about my wonderful husband. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs...
reply by Judy Lawless on 26-Jan-2021
    I'm so happy for you!
Comment from Wendy G
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Amazing how our perception of time changes with our particular situations. Interesting concept. A great theme for reflection. good wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
    Exactly. I feel the same. Thank you for the wonderful review and kind compliments. It is very much appreciated, dear Wendy. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs...