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Comment from Colin John
Hi, I cannot remember the last time I gave three stars to anyone, but this is not a horror story in my view as it would be like me putting a 5-7-5 up about Jesus and that would not be acceptable,also their are plenty of people who will be welcoming him for a second term, so again not a Horror entry.Kind regards and nothing personable.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Hi, I cannot remember the last time I gave three stars to anyone, but this is not a horror story in my view as it would be like me putting a 5-7-5 up about Jesus and that would not be acceptable,also their are plenty of people who will be welcoming him for a second term, so again not a Horror entry.Kind regards and nothing personable.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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No sweat Colin, thank you.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a respectable contest entry since the message is clear and to the point. I would urge you to listen to Michael Moore's recent podcast warning us we can't be too complacent. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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This is a respectable contest entry since the message is clear and to the point. I would urge you to listen to Michael Moore's recent podcast warning us we can't be too complacent. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Hello Susan and thank you for visiting and the wonderful review; I am a big fan of Michael Moore.
Comment from humpwhistle
Horrific is one of those hyperbolic words Trump tosses around 'such as the world has never seen'. I can't stand to listen to the man. He knows a grand total of five adjectives, and even fewer adverbs. And don't get me started on his policies.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Horrific is one of those hyperbolic words Trump tosses around 'such as the world has never seen'. I can't stand to listen to the man. He knows a grand total of five adjectives, and even fewer adverbs. And don't get me started on his policies.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Hello Lee, I thank you for the time and the wonderful insights and I agree with you my friend.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not everyone will agree and I wouldn't count your chickens just yet. Anything can happen with these elections, your write may even cause a riot! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Not everyone will agree and I wouldn't count your chickens just yet. Anything can happen with these elections, your write may even cause a riot! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Dolly, thank you and I welcome riots as long as they are civilized and disciplined; appreciate your time and agree anything can happen in the elections; I am hopeful for some sanity.
Comment from The Death
Nice take on the prompt! It's indeed a horror for you all. I am sure you'll get a lower rating for this from one of the followers. You have highlighted the social issue nicely. Good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Nice take on the prompt! It's indeed a horror for you all. I am sure you'll get a lower rating for this from one of the followers. You have highlighted the social issue nicely. Good luck!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Hello Anupam, thank you for stopping by, I agree some might not like the substance of it, but, I am hopeful that we'll get rid of this idiot come November.
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Mystery Author,
His reign has seemed like a horror story. I'm Canadian, but what goes on south of the border affects us up here. I fail to see why so many people love the man. Some of my religious friends say, that if he is eliminated from government, World War III is right around the corner. So what is the actual horror... that he remains President of the United States, or that he is defeated and a terrible war is closer than we think? It will be an interesting fall. That's for sure. I think poor old Donnie is his worst enemy. Somebody take that hand-held away from him!
It's a good subject for the contest. You've got the right syllable count, and you've nailed the "horror" theme.
Good Luck!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Hi Mystery Author,
His reign has seemed like a horror story. I'm Canadian, but what goes on south of the border affects us up here. I fail to see why so many people love the man. Some of my religious friends say, that if he is eliminated from government, World War III is right around the corner. So what is the actual horror... that he remains President of the United States, or that he is defeated and a terrible war is closer than we think? It will be an interesting fall. That's for sure. I think poor old Donnie is his worst enemy. Somebody take that hand-held away from him!
It's a good subject for the contest. You've got the right syllable count, and you've nailed the "horror" theme.
Good Luck!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Hello Kimbob, my friend I thank you for your wonderful insights and agree with you; please take care.
Comment from LisaMay
Oh to be free of the horror, the horror! Please America - VOTE HIM OUT.
Your poem is, I sincerely hope, indicative of the majority opinion and he will be a 1-term president. I don't live in the States, but his attitude and policies (and lack of them at times) have had a severe impact outside the States as well.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Oh to be free of the horror, the horror! Please America - VOTE HIM OUT.
Your poem is, I sincerely hope, indicative of the majority opinion and he will be a 1-term president. I don't live in the States, but his attitude and policies (and lack of them at times) have had a severe impact outside the States as well.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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He's a cancer and sadly, not terminal. I thank you for your visit and appreciate the insights.
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Terminal would be good. His 'disease' has infected too many die-hard people. Blind loyalty.
I've been hoping he'll catch the virus.