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Tickle

Yawning can be dangerous

3 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Aaaack - that's awful! ;) :) Definitely a great offering to convey 'horrorific' in but seventeen syllables - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
    Agree, not very appetizing. Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from The Death
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This will definitely scare most of the people. Not many people would like spider anywhere around them. This poem has excellent imagery to create the scare. Excellent word economy as well. Good luck!

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
    Thanks much for your read, review and encouraging words.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
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Oh NOOOO! A spider, and in my mouth, falling into it when my mouth was open...I can't even think of it without uncontrollable shudders. On the picture it looks really frightening. A black spider too, aren't they dangerous? But I think, for the photo they used one of those rubber play-spiders, just to scare the hell out of mom!

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
    Thanks for the read and review. Yeah, we once put one in a nun's desk drawer. She made us stay after school for an hour. Rubber snake are good too.
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 01-Aug-2020
    Naughty, naughty! Snakes and spiders are my worst nightmares. And I am not a nun!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
    Lucky you. Stay safe.
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 01-Aug-2020
    Smiles!