Renga Multi-Author Book
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Comment from l.raven
Hi Bill, what a stunning picture sweet guy...
I love any part of a storm...from the rain...all the way to the clouds...they bring a calm feeling in the air...the calm before the storm...and everything that lives...counts on them for life...I love your poem...very nicely written you...Love Linda xxoo
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Hi Bill, what a stunning picture sweet guy...
I love any part of a storm...from the rain...all the way to the clouds...they bring a calm feeling in the air...the calm before the storm...and everything that lives...counts on them for life...I love your poem...very nicely written you...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A very lovely, yet typical, scene. Hillsides covered with flowers waiting to drink the rain when it falls. We all pretty much love the rain because we know it is always needed. Nicely done.
Ralf
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A very lovely, yet typical, scene. Hillsides covered with flowers waiting to drink the rain when it falls. We all pretty much love the rain because we know it is always needed. Nicely done.
Ralf
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
Comment from lyenochka
I guess the storm is completely part of Nature so the flowers are not afraid. Thanks for joining in the Renga book, Bill. Now you got me curious about the previous poem. Hope you are doing well!
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I guess the storm is completely part of Nature so the flowers are not afraid. Thanks for joining in the Renga book, Bill. Now you got me curious about the previous poem. Hope you are doing well!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from judiverse
A lot of people are contributing to this multi-author book. You make an interesting contrast between your first seven syllables and the second. In your first part, you describe the storm clouds as having an ominous glare. By contrast, the violets have no fear. Maybe because they are in clusters. Lovely wording and artwork choice. judi
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A lot of people are contributing to this multi-author book. You make an interesting contrast between your first seven syllables and the second. In your first part, you describe the storm clouds as having an ominous glare. By contrast, the violets have no fear. Maybe because they are in clusters. Lovely wording and artwork choice. judi
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a lovely nature based poem. The message is short and succinct. the picture is a fitting complement. I enjoyed reading this one. Best wishes for your ongoing creative efforts.
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This is a lovely nature based poem. The message is short and succinct. the picture is a fitting complement. I enjoyed reading this one. Best wishes for your ongoing creative efforts.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from Janetsue
This posting offers a panaramic beauty in both photograph and message. We often see far off storm clouds approaching quickly, and in extremely dry weather, leaves have often turned upward in hopes of relief. I enjoyed reading this very much, Bill. :-)
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This posting offers a panaramic beauty in both photograph and message. We often see far off storm clouds approaching quickly, and in extremely dry weather, leaves have often turned upward in hopes of relief. I enjoyed reading this very much, Bill. :-)
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020