"Heart Spoken Moments"
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Heartless"Fine poetry and stories from the Heart
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Comment from mermaids
You have a strong steady beat and a descriptive use of words that impacts your poem. A feeling of sadness comes through your words clearly. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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You have a strong steady beat and a descriptive use of words that impacts your poem. A feeling of sadness comes through your words clearly. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you Elaine for your words your views and your time.
Ricky
Comment from To Write Is To Live
The stream-of-consciousness style works for you, RICKY1024, as memories meld with proverbs, then movie titles, then idioms, then outbursts of frustration, anger, and pain.
Thank you for writing and sharing a most thought-provoking poem, "Heartless."
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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The stream-of-consciousness style works for you, RICKY1024, as memories meld with proverbs, then movie titles, then idioms, then outbursts of frustration, anger, and pain.
Thank you for writing and sharing a most thought-provoking poem, "Heartless."
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Things for the heartbreaker but a lot of what I work on it is I'm used to it though.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024