Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Another fine addition to Gypsy Blue Rose's book here June, as wild flowers grow abundantly and remind us that nature is always faithful and true, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020

I enjoyed adding to the Renga book. Thanks for the positive feedback!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

We Are Not Alone
by June Sargent

Hello, June,

I can always count on you to get the book back on track. I love this chapter. Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is beautiful. Well done, I love the idea of thriving in love.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020

Thanks so much! I hope the adventure continues...

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 in addition to the multi-author Renga book. Indeed we can just look around us in nature to know our creator is with us all day and night. He plant flowers everywhere.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020

So true! Appreciate your feedback in this.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I love this poem very much. It is clear and concise. The words flow in all the lines. I like it. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well written. Nice work. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020

Glad you enjoyed this piece. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

reply by Raul1 on 31-Jul-2020

You're welcome.

Comment from Cindy Decker

Excellent

Hi June,
You've written a lovely 5-7-5.
When I used to take walks, I would take notice of some of the wild flowers and colorful weeds we have nearby. God's beauty is perfect, down to the smallest flower petal. Your poem is a true inspiration.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020

Thank you! I?m glad this piece resonated with you.