Comment from Lucy de Welles

Excellent

Lovely addition to the Renga. The idea of mountains as transmission towers of prayer requests to God is thought-provoking and invigorating. Love the green for growth, and nature.
Well done!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020

Thanks Lucy, for these super comments and a great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

I love the metaphor and the medley of S sounds in the first two lines complemented, contrapuntally, by the R and L sounds/ Well done! Great closing AHA too. Lovely presentation.

Blessings,
rd

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020

Thanks so much RD, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings, Roy

reply by rama devi on 02-Aug-2020

Blessings!

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Such lovely imagery of these majestic mountains being sentinels watching over us - pointing the way to where the Hearer of prayers resides. Encouraging us to look up for direction.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020

Thanks June, for these excellent comments and a super review, blessings. Roy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I wish I was a poet, but my poem are so sad. I enjoyed reading your book entry. I know this book with be a joy to read. Thank you for sharing this wish up. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020

Thanks so much Barbara, for these terrific comments and lovely comments, Blessings Roy

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 in addition to the Renga multi-author book. The magnetic sentinels emphasize our smallness in the universe. We may be the most intelligent but we lack majestically awesomeness.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020

Thanks Sandra, for these lovely comments and a superb review,, Blessings Roy

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I loved this inventive write Roy as these mountains seem to be closer to heaven than any of use and they are transmitters in your poem here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020

Thanks Dolly, for these lovely comments and a superb review,, Blessings Roy

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Sentinels...
by royowen

Hello, Roy,

Thank you very much for adding a chapter to our book of renga. Beautiful haiku. I love the idea of mountains as sentinels in between to God....nice! Great job, my friend.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020

Thanks Gypsy, for these great comments, and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Cindy Decker

Excellent

Roy, beautiful photo and poem. Your poem is a unique way of describing intercessors of prayer. Majestic mountain tops, reaching upward to the sky inspiring prayer also.
Excellent message in just a few words.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020

Thanks Cindy, for these great comments, and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Brenda Henderson

Excellent

Nice verse. I especially liked the artwork that you chose to complement this piece. It is a truly inspiring landscape and it pairs excellently here. Thank you for sharing this with your readers.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020

Thanks Brenda, for these splendid comments, and a super review, you?re kind, blessings Roy

reply by Brenda Henderson on 02-Aug-2020

You're very welcome!

reply by Brenda Henderson on 09-Aug-2020

You're very welcome

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like the mountains as "Masts of transmitting requests." So thankful for all the angels, too - who are those "sentinels" who help us transmit our requests as does the Holy Spirit! Thanks so much for adding this poem!

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020

Thanks for these marvellous comments and encouragement Helen, blessings Roy