Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Morning Possibilities"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
7 total reviews
Comment from karenina
I like this, perhaps because I live by this philosophy. I can't change yesterday so I don't swell on it. Each day is the dawning of a fresh palette and limitless paint!--Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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I like this, perhaps because I live by this philosophy. I can't change yesterday so I don't swell on it. Each day is the dawning of a fresh palette and limitless paint!--Karenina
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and valuable feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.
Hugs,
Gypsy
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BTW I picked up a BLUE journal yesterday! Soon I'll have a "Gypsy" reference book!--Karenina
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
A new day awakens, but the opportunities during this COVID-19 are sadly limited. Your verse, within this chapter, gives us hope of endless possibilities. Your chosen photograph is a good match for your few words.
Mark
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Gypsy,
A new day awakens, but the opportunities during this COVID-19 are sadly limited. Your verse, within this chapter, gives us hope of endless possibilities. Your chosen photograph is a good match for your few words.
Mark
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and valuable feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from lightink
Lovely, positive message- opening the day with so many possibilities and feeling really hopeful. Great addition to the renga and becomes even more meaningful once the following piece is read.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Lovely, positive message- opening the day with so many possibilities and feeling really hopeful. Great addition to the renga and becomes even more meaningful once the following piece is read.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Jyoti, I hope you are feeling well and happy.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, true enough, but you forgot to mention that the hopes are usually dashed by lunch time--just want to not raise people's expectations!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, true enough, but you forgot to mention that the hopes are usually dashed by lunch time--just want to not raise people's expectations!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Mike, I hope you are feeling well and happy.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from June Sargent
Nice follow up to your haiku. Light of a new day ushers in endless possibilities. Very positive conclusion. Hopefully someone can continue the journey with another haiku.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Nice follow up to your haiku. Light of a new day ushers in endless possibilities. Very positive conclusion. Hopefully someone can continue the journey with another haiku.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, June, I hope you are feeling well and happy.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from rama devi
They sure are! I walked the doggie at dawn today (I pet sit on the side), and felt exactly that energy light up the sky. This is simple, direct and effective. Stunning presentation! Lovely! This makes a fine addition to the book.
Hugs,
rd
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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They sure are! I walked the doggie at dawn today (I pet sit on the side), and felt exactly that energy light up the sky. This is simple, direct and effective. Stunning presentation! Lovely! This makes a fine addition to the book.
Hugs,
rd
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Rama Devi, I hope you are feeling well and happy.
hugs,
gypsy
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Yes! Thanks! Hope the same for you.
Hugs,
rd
Comment from lyenochka
What a great meditation to start the day. I love that "morning possibilities are endless" because that's before anything has happened yet and we can put on a hopeful and optimistic mindset to approach the day!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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What a great meditation to start the day. I love that "morning possibilities are endless" because that's before anything has happened yet and we can put on a hopeful and optimistic mindset to approach the day!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Helen, you are very kind.
hugs,
gypsy