Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

This is a very poignant story. I bet that secret has been kept many times. This situation is probably more common that we might think. I like the development of your narrarator. He journeys us through the whole ordeal. This could be a longers story with a back story and something which continues to have the reader rooting for the suitor.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020

Thank you Liz for reading my entry and for the very nice review. I think you are correct about happening more than we know.
Thanks also about the comments on the narration.
Best regards,
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Theme is realistically expressed, I like and enjoyed the organized taletelling, and practice is shared, well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020

Thank you Alcreator for reading my story and for the very nice review. It means a lot to have the feedback.
Best regards,
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Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Wow this is a deep secret, but you kept it fr a good cause, and now you get a chance to reveal it and take it one step further. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020

Thank you lza for reading my story and for the very nice review.
I appreciate the feedback - thank you very much.
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