Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-I like your theme of a recipe,
with good imagery and
repetition of the 'w' sound.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020

I appreciate your review. Thank you!

reply by Pam (respa) on 31-Jul-2020

You are welcome.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I loved the clever word play here and this is a faithful write as you liken bread to the food of life itself, those age old recipes have stood us in good stead, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020

Thanks Dolly - I appreciate your review.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables to convey a powerful message about the sustenance and joy of the soul--how it is achieved. Excellent metaphors!

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020

Thanks very much for your appreciation of my poem!

Comment from H. Darwin Reeves

Excellent

Well said. The piece speaks on several levels. Physically we are fed from the bounty of God and the hands of the farmer, the soul is fed on the Word of God. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020

Thanks for your comprehension of my poem. I appreciate your review.