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Comment from mermaids
There is emotion and feelings in your poetic form. "No song are birds to sing" is a great line that shows the impact of our current problems in this country.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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There is emotion and feelings in your poetic form. "No song are birds to sing" is a great line that shows the impact of our current problems in this country.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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I actually immerse myself out in the ocean on my back and try to hear whatever noises I can hear and feel and smell and then I go back and write!
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If we allow life to be tossed away then it will most certainly happen, if we are isolated we need to concentrate on making use of our time and being productive and focus our energies on creating something good, then when we look back we see our achievements. A poignant write Ricky, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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If we allow life to be tossed away then it will most certainly happen, if we are isolated we need to concentrate on making use of our time and being productive and focus our energies on creating something good, then when we look back we see our achievements. A poignant write Ricky, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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When I want to go deep I go right into the water go out to The Sandbar or further lay on my back float immerse my ears into the water and try to hear any sounds and become one with the ocean this way when I go back to write I feel I have a little bit more going.
Does that make sense Miss Dolly?
Thanks,
Ricky