Bright Recollections
They are what moves the poet's pen...43 total reviews
Comment from Lobber
Hello, wonderful images )pen's purview( and love the phrase )From pure fantasy to whispered voodoo( ALSO
)Bright recollections of childhood's rainbow( - from start to finish remains a haunting phrase ...
Love it!
- Lobber
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
Hello, wonderful images )pen's purview( and love the phrase )From pure fantasy to whispered voodoo( ALSO
)Bright recollections of childhood's rainbow( - from start to finish remains a haunting phrase ...
Love it!
- Lobber
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you, THANK YOU my wonderful FS friend!! I know you didn't know this was me, but it was so good to see those stars and your name this morning!! I'm still wearing my smile from the last response I wrote to you a few minutes ago -- so MORE thank you's!! ;) :) I do hope you have a wonderful week, Jer, and that you find lots of reasons to smile! :) Yvette
P.S. I'm gonna try to get caught up some today since I've not much on the agenda for once... we'll see! ;)
Comment from LisaMay
I enjoyed your poem's theme of how a poet's pen can keep "Bright recollections of childhood's rainbow" alive, even though memories fade and life slows down and loses its colour.
Your range of poetic topics is beautifully expressed:
"From pure fantasy to whispered voodoo
Through fields of stars or yon meadow...".
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
I enjoyed your poem's theme of how a poet's pen can keep "Bright recollections of childhood's rainbow" alive, even though memories fade and life slows down and loses its colour.
Your range of poetic topics is beautifully expressed:
"From pure fantasy to whispered voodoo
Through fields of stars or yon meadow...".
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from Janet Foor
Very nice picture to compliment your well written rondeau poem. The repeating line worked very well. The rhyme scheme was good.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
Very nice picture to compliment your well written rondeau poem. The repeating line worked very well. The rhyme scheme was good.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your review!
Comment from Mia Twysted
Childhood is a wonderful time to dream and you envision the world with new eyes that have only begun to see the beauty that lies around them. That is what I take away from this wonderful piece.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
Childhood is a wonderful time to dream and you envision the world with new eyes that have only begun to see the beauty that lies around them. That is what I take away from this wonderful piece.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your insightful comments.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent Rondel for the contest
with very good rhymes to the form.
The two repeat lines work well in all locations
and the theme is uplifting.
Nicely done with very good art work to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
You've written an excellent Rondel for the contest
with very good rhymes to the form.
The two repeat lines work well in all locations
and the theme is uplifting.
Nicely done with very good art work to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your encouraging review!
Comment from mauial
Very nicely penned poem. My favorite lines: Dreams of today will find breath tomorrow.While drowning in sweet mem'ries' hue. That is so profoundly stated about our hopes. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
Very nicely penned poem. My favorite lines: Dreams of today will find breath tomorrow.While drowning in sweet mem'ries' hue. That is so profoundly stated about our hopes. Keep writing.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from lyenochka
Such a lovely rondel poem which brings to life the nostalgia of "childhood's rainbow." And these dreams still return through the poet's pen. Especially loved the second stanza. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
Such a lovely rondel poem which brings to life the nostalgia of "childhood's rainbow." And these dreams still return through the poet's pen. Especially loved the second stanza. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, Helen.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a wonderful entry for the Rondel Poetry writing prompt. I sincerely hope this poem does well in the contest. I send you the best of good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
This is a wonderful entry for the Rondel Poetry writing prompt. I sincerely hope this poem does well in the contest. I send you the best of good luck!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your encouraging review, Rebecca!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very fine example of a Rondel, a French form I tried myself once or twice. I find it very melodical. Your keep the rules to a "t", great descriptive imagery, impressive artistic presentation and photo.
I wish you a lot of luck in the contest with this strong entry.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
A very fine example of a Rondel, a French form I tried myself once or twice. I find it very melodical. Your keep the rules to a "t", great descriptive imagery, impressive artistic presentation and photo.
I wish you a lot of luck in the contest with this strong entry.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Wow! Your review just made my weekend- THANK YOU so much! Have a wonderful day!
Comment from Raul1
This is a very nice poem you have written. I like how you wrote childhood rainbow of its deeper connection. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck on the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
This is a very nice poem you have written. I like how you wrote childhood rainbow of its deeper connection. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much for your comments on this one!