Psych Out News
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Aunt Kills Nephew with Pet "Fake News Stories
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Comment from Mistydawn
What a story a very odd way to go for sure. Your story is well-written with great details. I was thinking about all the times we use to scare each other as I was reading through it and they could've gone wrong. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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What a story a very odd way to go for sure. Your story is well-written with great details. I was thinking about all the times we use to scare each other as I was reading through it and they could've gone wrong. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank for the review I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Okay, this one was just the right amount of crazy to overcome some of reality's insanity this morning... if only for a bit! ;) Thanx for the smile and have a great week! ;)
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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LOL! Okay, this one was just the right amount of crazy to overcome some of reality's insanity this morning... if only for a bit! ;) Thanx for the smile and have a great week! ;)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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I am glad it made you smile.
Comment from Debra White
Hello Mia Twysted,
This is such a fun read! I REALLY hope it's not one of the stories that actually made the news though!
Well told in fabulous reporter style I enjoyed your piece very much.
Thank you for an entertaining few minutes.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Hello Mia Twysted,
This is such a fun read! I REALLY hope it's not one of the stories that actually made the news though!
Well told in fabulous reporter style I enjoyed your piece very much.
Thank you for an entertaining few minutes.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This definitely fits the bill for Psych Out News. It is a funny tale with a humorous title. The title was a real hook that got my attention. /this is very well written and funny.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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This definitely fits the bill for Psych Out News. It is a funny tale with a humorous title. The title was a real hook that got my attention. /this is very well written and funny.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you I am glad that you liked it.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, really is this even real? Can a child die because of a ...fish. :"Tomboy snuck up behind his aunt before jumping out from the shadows yelling, "boo." Startled, Ms. Barracuda scooped up a fish in the net, accidentally flinging it helpless into the air. The boy then telling his aunt to "watch this" opened his mouth and proceeded to catch the fish. The fish became lodged in his throat, cutting off his ability to breathe.
"He was such a sweet boy. Always willing to lend a hand," said Hellen Honey, 89, retired lumberjack and neighbor or Ms. Barracuda. Honey added, "He wasn't the smartest apple on the tree, though." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Wow, really is this even real? Can a child die because of a ...fish. :"Tomboy snuck up behind his aunt before jumping out from the shadows yelling, "boo." Startled, Ms. Barracuda scooped up a fish in the net, accidentally flinging it helpless into the air. The boy then telling his aunt to "watch this" opened his mouth and proceeded to catch the fish. The fish became lodged in his throat, cutting off his ability to breathe.
"He was such a sweet boy. Always willing to lend a hand," said Hellen Honey, 89, retired lumberjack and neighbor or Ms. Barracuda. Honey added, "He wasn't the smartest apple on the tree, though." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is interesting and even though I didn't enjoy it it was pretty goodly written.
I did find two grammar issues.
I also found a little hard to follow so the flow wasn't that great.
Keep trying and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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This is interesting and even though I didn't enjoy it it was pretty goodly written.
I did find two grammar issues.
I also found a little hard to follow so the flow wasn't that great.
Keep trying and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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I am sorry it was not your piece of cake, but you can't please everyone. Maybe you will like the next one.
