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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Sad to think the crying continues with no let up, over and over. But then again, we dont really know do we? My boys loved apple pie with a slice of melted cheese on
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Sad to think the crying continues with no let up, over and over. But then again, we dont really know do we? My boys loved apple pie with a slice of melted cheese on
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Lucky boys!
Ricky
Comment from Mia Twysted
I feel a reaching in this piece. Clawing and hoping to get a response to see a flicker of something that says they are there for you and they car. However, it seemed out of since and I couldn'[t find a melody, if you will, to the poem.
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I feel a reaching in this piece. Clawing and hoping to get a response to see a flicker of something that says they are there for you and they car. However, it seemed out of since and I couldn'[t find a melody, if you will, to the poem.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Yup.