"Heart Spoken Moments"
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Praying With All My Broke Heart?"Fine poetry and stories from the Heart
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Comment from elchupakabra
The quotations are jarring and unnecessary but I'm not going to deduct points for that (though someone who is more finicky may). As far as the piece itself, I enjoyed it. Good work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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The quotations are jarring and unnecessary but I'm not going to deduct points for that (though someone who is more finicky may). As far as the piece itself, I enjoyed it. Good work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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I think everybody has their little different styles like I don't like it when people just don't separate their sentences and run them all together course they punctuated him but it's still I don't like that I like it a little bit more organized and I do of course emphasize my work when it's important the way I do.
But anywho thanks.
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Comment from Mia Twysted
I feel a pain with this piece, maybe a redemption at hand. However, I also feel disconnected from the poem. It doesn't draw me in and take hold. But it is clear there is a story to be told and a healing process that needs to begin.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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I feel a pain with this piece, maybe a redemption at hand. However, I also feel disconnected from the poem. It doesn't draw me in and take hold. But it is clear there is a story to be told and a healing process that needs to begin.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Of course a reviewer has their choice to review anything they feel.
and a writer has their choice to do what they also feel.