Sensual Reminders
Because of you, they're everywhere21 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, this is sublime, poet! Talk about imagery evoked, and your presentation is beautiful. I would be very surprised if this doesn't win the prompt, and I'd sure want to read what did!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Wow, this is sublime, poet! Talk about imagery evoked, and your presentation is beautiful. I would be very surprised if this doesn't win the prompt, and I'd sure want to read what did!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thanx for your review on this one, Dawn -- good to pull out those 'secret wishes' once in a while... ;):) Yvette
Comment from Ronni
Woweeee this one blows it all from beginning to end.....with barely
even time to draw breath....just sublime ecstacy...
For a 1 line entry poem...this is a gallant gale of glory!
Thanks for sharing....best of luck!
Ronni
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Woweeee this one blows it all from beginning to end.....with barely
even time to draw breath....just sublime ecstacy...
For a 1 line entry poem...this is a gallant gale of glory!
Thanks for sharing....best of luck!
Ronni
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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LOL!! You're awesome, my lady -- sometimes we gotta let those little secret wishes out through the pen, ya know?! ;) Thanx so much for those stars and glad to 'hear' the smile on your face! ;) Yvette
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem warmed me on a Downunder winter's day, breath of frost around my ears and a chill of nostalgia in my heart as I walked alone.
Aaah, those were the days - you portrayed the sensuality of nature and a loving life au naturel. The picture choice is a perfect accompaniment.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Your poem warmed me on a Downunder winter's day, breath of frost around my ears and a chill of nostalgia in my heart as I walked alone.
Aaah, those were the days - you portrayed the sensuality of nature and a loving life au naturel. The picture choice is a perfect accompaniment.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Hooray for a little warming Down there! ;) Thanx so much for your review on this shortie, LisaMay -- always good to hear from you over here!!! ;) Yvette
Comment from palmart
Wow! Title invites to read, and message conveyed melts the screen! (jaja) Great choice of the picture that fits perfectly with poem. I see that one line is enough when creativity is as sharp as yours. It is a gift to have the condition to say (and suggest) a lot with just a few (but powerful) words!!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Wow! Title invites to read, and message conveyed melts the screen! (jaja) Great choice of the picture that fits perfectly with poem. I see that one line is enough when creativity is as sharp as yours. It is a gift to have the condition to say (and suggest) a lot with just a few (but powerful) words!!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Oh, thank you so very much for your review here!! So glad you enjoyed and caught a bit of the heat I tried to convey!
Comment from write hand blue
An appropriate picture heads the single line of text. The brown background shows the single line of yellow text to good advantage.
The figures in the picture look to be in the early stages of getting intimate. Ten minutes later and you may have won the contest. LOL
Nice poem. Good luck. ~Mel~
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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An appropriate picture heads the single line of text. The brown background shows the single line of yellow text to good advantage.
The figures in the picture look to be in the early stages of getting intimate. Ten minutes later and you may have won the contest. LOL
Nice poem. Good luck. ~Mel~
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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LOL! ;) Thank you, Blue!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Your one-liner is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the 1 Line Only writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Your one-liner is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the 1 Line Only writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, Rebecca! 8-)
Comment from Mia Twysted
Interesting picture you have choosen to go with your poem. It adds a level of sexualiaty to it, or heightens the sexualitay it already portrays.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Interesting picture you have choosen to go with your poem. It adds a level of sexualiaty to it, or heightens the sexualitay it already portrays.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, Mia! 8-)
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-line poem, Sensual Reminders, uses ten words and brings the reader into what is better left to one's imagination.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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This one-line poem, Sensual Reminders, uses ten words and brings the reader into what is better left to one's imagination.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, Bill! 8-)
Comment from R. Hiland
In my opinion there is only one other true one line poem among the entrants. I like yours best. Good job. ...........................................
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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In my opinion there is only one other true one line poem among the entrants. I like yours best. Good job. ...........................................
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, R! 8-)
Comment from Joan E.
The evocative image you selected and the choice of whisper are perfect. Your addition of alliteration intensified the emotion. Best wishes in the 1-Line Poem contest. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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The evocative image you selected and the choice of whisper are perfect. Your addition of alliteration intensified the emotion. Best wishes in the 1-Line Poem contest. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, Joan!
