Fall in New England
A Rondaful Poem18 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
It has always been a dream of mine to see the fall colors in New England, but never have I been able to avail myself of such a beautiful sight.
Paticia
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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It has always been a dream of mine to see the fall colors in New England, but never have I been able to avail myself of such a beautiful sight.
Paticia
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing Fall in New England and using Dolly's new form. I enjoyed your rhythm, rhymes, and repeats. (I think "draw" picked up an "s" in the second stanza.) Your color presentation is perfect. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you for sharing Fall in New England and using Dolly's new form. I enjoyed your rhythm, rhymes, and repeats. (I think "draw" picked up an "s" in the second stanza.) Your color presentation is perfect. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Between poor eyes and arthritic fingers, I never know what creeps into my posts! Thanks for the heads up! Glad you liked this piece.
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Join the club! I am glad I could be helpful. Smiles- Joan
Comment from harmony13
These words are uplifting, interesting, clear and creative. As I read
this poem I thought about how much I miss the fall in New York! I now
live in Florida - there is very little fall! The words of this poem are
engaging, fun and colorful! The artwork is perfect.....
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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These words are uplifting, interesting, clear and creative. As I read
this poem I thought about how much I miss the fall in New York! I now
live in Florida - there is very little fall! The words of this poem are
engaging, fun and colorful! The artwork is perfect.....
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing your sentiments!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Rondaful about fall in new England that is s wonderful sight to see as you described it. The best time to harvest ripe pumpkins and the yearly family fair.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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A very well-written Rondaful about fall in new England that is s wonderful sight to see as you described it. The best time to harvest ripe pumpkins and the yearly family fair.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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So nice of you to drop by to share your thoughts!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with Dolly's complex style, June. I love the image you paired with your well-chosen words. You adhered to the format well. Your words create great imaery--I could see everything you mentioned. I love fall. This was very descriptive and pleasing to read.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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You did a great job with Dolly's complex style, June. I love the image you paired with your well-chosen words. You adhered to the format well. Your words create great imaery--I could see everything you mentioned. I love fall. This was very descriptive and pleasing to read.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to share your encouraging feedback!
Comment from BethShelby
This is a nice form of poetry and you have written in beautifully. I love New England in the fall. Fall is pretty everywhere but I remember the one time I was in Vermont and New Hampshire in the fall and it was spectacular.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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This is a nice form of poetry and you have written in beautifully. I love New England in the fall. Fall is pretty everywhere but I remember the one time I was in Vermont and New Hampshire in the fall and it was spectacular.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and
presentation, Janice.
-You did a good job with
this form.
-I have tried it out, but
I'm not going to post it for awhile.
-I like your couplet lines and all
of the fall imagery in the poem,
along with the rhyme.
-Very well done!
-Dolly has a way with these forms:)
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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-Very nice artwork and
presentation, Janice.
-You did a good job with
this form.
-I have tried it out, but
I'm not going to post it for awhile.
-I like your couplet lines and all
of the fall imagery in the poem,
along with the rhyme.
-Very well done!
-Dolly has a way with these forms:)
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece!
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You are very welcome, June.
Comment from Gloria ....
That is a gorgeous piece of art. It looks surreal and my goodness time is moving into fall much too fast.
This is an excellent rondaful that just needs a few rhyme tweaks
"where catapulting pumpkins wins a prize needs to rhyme with the second line ending in away, and bring happy smiles needs an end rhyme of skies, so likely a shift of those two words.
An easy repair I'm sure, and many thanks for sharing your beautiful poem today, June.
Gloria
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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That is a gorgeous piece of art. It looks surreal and my goodness time is moving into fall much too fast.
This is an excellent rondaful that just needs a few rhyme tweaks
"where catapulting pumpkins wins a prize needs to rhyme with the second line ending in away, and bring happy smiles needs an end rhyme of skies, so likely a shift of those two words.
An easy repair I'm sure, and many thanks for sharing your beautiful poem today, June.
Gloria
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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I?m so glad you caught the rhyming errors! I think I?ve fixed them. Let me know if they work.
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Ok. I think I?ve finally got it! Been trying to create a Cryptic Labyrinth at the sane time...brain cannot handle it! Thanks again fir the heads up.
Comment from royowen
It can't be autumn yet in New England June, you've written a very lovely poem here my friend, I've been to New England in the autumn, leaf peeping they call it, beautifully written dear friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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It can't be autumn yet in New England June, you've written a very lovely poem here my friend, I've been to New England in the autumn, leaf peeping they call it, beautifully written dear friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece!
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Welcome
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Mid-fall is my favorite time of the year, concerning weather, which is mild;
and I never get tired of looking at the changing leaves! Your poem is skillfully-written, descriptive, and lovely.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Mid-fall is my favorite time of the year, concerning weather, which is mild;
and I never get tired of looking at the changing leaves! Your poem is skillfully-written, descriptive, and lovely.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece!