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Come November

5/7/5 poem

11 total reviews 
Comment from Mia Twysted
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I hate wearing a mask. It so hard to talk to people and to hear them when they have theirs on. And no one can see me smile at them which is my way of saying hello.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    Hello Mia, I know what you mean and how difficult it is to talk/listen wearing a mask; let's hope and pray that we overcome this pandemic soon; thank you for visiting.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This political 5-7-5, Come November, has the proper formatting and suggests, I think, that the Great Divider with be able to cover up his mouth.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    Hello Bill and thank you very much for the wonderful review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice.

Trump gives mixed messages about wearing masks. We all should wear them.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    Hello Gypsy and thank you for your visit and the insights.
Comment from Monica Chaddick
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'Unmask hypocrites" indeed! You speak volumes with very few words. This world is falling apart due to false profits and political lies. Thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    Hello Monica and thank you very much for visiting and your wonderful insights.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This poem entry is well written and thought out. It should do well as an entry for the Political 5-7-5 writing prompt. Best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    Hello Rebecca, I appreciate your time and am glad that you like the write, thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I heard that Trump has been using a mask recently and he must set an example for everyone else, but the pandemic politics is another matter, I hope it all works out for you guys, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Hello Dolly and thank you very much for visiting and the review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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lol. This made me laugh out loud. This was a really cool rendition of the contest, with an award winning picture. It should do extremely well in the contest, in fact, I might be looking at the winner, best of luck in the booths. I like your sense of humor.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
    I am delighted to read your wonderful comments and so glad that you like it; thank you very much.
reply by Eternal Muse on 27-Jul-2020
    Oh, I cant' wait for November to come (lol)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL! Yeah, I haven't seen a good use of the word 'daft' in a while - great job here!! ;) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
    I thank you and pleased that you like the write.
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
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Dear author,





Wow!!!! What an excellent piece of work!!!!!! Awesome job!!!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory!!! Keep writing!!!!

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
    Hello Anne-Marie and thank you for your visit and the wonderful review; glad you like it.
Comment from mauial
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Nice political commentary with the 5-7-5 poem form. I think they are unmasked, the trouble is their supporters are either deaf or blind. Politicians are all the same to me.

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 Comment Written 27-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
    I agree my friend, they are all the same, all crooks. I thank you for your time and the wonderful review.