Come November
5/7/5 poem11 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
I hate wearing a mask. It so hard to talk to people and to hear them when they have theirs on. And no one can see me smile at them which is my way of saying hello.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
I hate wearing a mask. It so hard to talk to people and to hear them when they have theirs on. And no one can see me smile at them which is my way of saying hello.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Hello Mia, I know what you mean and how difficult it is to talk/listen wearing a mask; let's hope and pray that we overcome this pandemic soon; thank you for visiting.
Comment from Bill Schott
This political 5-7-5, Come November, has the proper formatting and suggests, I think, that the Great Divider with be able to cover up his mouth.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
This political 5-7-5, Come November, has the proper formatting and suggests, I think, that the Great Divider with be able to cover up his mouth.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Hello Bill and thank you very much for the wonderful review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice.
Trump gives mixed messages about wearing masks. We all should wear them.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
Hello, anonymous,
Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice.
Trump gives mixed messages about wearing masks. We all should wear them.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Hello Gypsy and thank you for your visit and the insights.
Comment from Monica Chaddick
'Unmask hypocrites" indeed! You speak volumes with very few words. This world is falling apart due to false profits and political lies. Thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
'Unmask hypocrites" indeed! You speak volumes with very few words. This world is falling apart due to false profits and political lies. Thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Hello Monica and thank you very much for visiting and your wonderful insights.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This poem entry is well written and thought out. It should do well as an entry for the Political 5-7-5 writing prompt. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
This poem entry is well written and thought out. It should do well as an entry for the Political 5-7-5 writing prompt. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Hello Rebecca, I appreciate your time and am glad that you like the write, thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I heard that Trump has been using a mask recently and he must set an example for everyone else, but the pandemic politics is another matter, I hope it all works out for you guys, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
I heard that Trump has been using a mask recently and he must set an example for everyone else, but the pandemic politics is another matter, I hope it all works out for you guys, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Hello Dolly and thank you very much for visiting and the review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
lol. This made me laugh out loud. This was a really cool rendition of the contest, with an award winning picture. It should do extremely well in the contest, in fact, I might be looking at the winner, best of luck in the booths. I like your sense of humor.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
lol. This made me laugh out loud. This was a really cool rendition of the contest, with an award winning picture. It should do extremely well in the contest, in fact, I might be looking at the winner, best of luck in the booths. I like your sense of humor.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I am delighted to read your wonderful comments and so glad that you like it; thank you very much.
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Oh, I cant' wait for November to come (lol)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Yeah, I haven't seen a good use of the word 'daft' in a while - great job here!! ;) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
LOL! Yeah, I haven't seen a good use of the word 'daft' in a while - great job here!! ;) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I thank you and pleased that you like the write.
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear author,
Wow!!!! What an excellent piece of work!!!!!! Awesome job!!!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory!!! Keep writing!!!!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
Dear author,
Wow!!!! What an excellent piece of work!!!!!! Awesome job!!!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory!!! Keep writing!!!!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Hello Anne-Marie and thank you for your visit and the wonderful review; glad you like it.
Comment from mauial
Nice political commentary with the 5-7-5 poem form. I think they are unmasked, the trouble is their supporters are either deaf or blind. Politicians are all the same to me.
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
Nice political commentary with the 5-7-5 poem form. I think they are unmasked, the trouble is their supporters are either deaf or blind. Politicians are all the same to me.
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I agree my friend, they are all the same, all crooks. I thank you for your time and the wonderful review.