Illicit Lure
The evils of corporate greed25 total reviews
Comment from Robert Reischl
That one hit me right between the eyes, because I worked for the greedy banks before the Sub-Prime Credit-Default Swaps-Collateralized Debt Obligations all made my job go POFF! We don't need you anymore because we made a lot of BAD managerial decisions.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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That one hit me right between the eyes, because I worked for the greedy banks before the Sub-Prime Credit-Default Swaps-Collateralized Debt Obligations all made my job go POFF! We don't need you anymore because we made a lot of BAD managerial decisions.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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Robert, so sorry for the late response. Thanks so much for the kind review. That really sucks what happened to you. If I get started on the greedy banks, you'll never shut me up, lol. Be well, Bill
Comment from lyenochka
You're right about that. There is so much greed among our corporations and their money is pushing the political parties to act in certain ways. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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You're right about that. There is so much greed among our corporations and their money is pushing the political parties to act in certain ways. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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So sorry for the late response. Thanks very much for the kind review and encouragement. Regards, Bill
Comment from Mia Twysted
It is sad how some people seem to be profiting off off all this madness that is going around. More concerned with the money in their pocket then the downfall of the masses.
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It is sad how some people seem to be profiting off off all this madness that is going around. More concerned with the money in their pocket then the downfall of the masses.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This political 5-7-5, Illicit Lure, has the proper formatting and notes that the greedy may be able to fix the election again.
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This political 5-7-5, Illicit Lure, has the proper formatting and notes that the greedy may be able to fix the election again.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
Comment from The Death
You have nicely highlighted a social issue here. This gap between the two needs to be reduced. You have delivered a strong message here. Excellent use of rhyming in this short space. Nice presentation.
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You have nicely highlighted a social issue here. This gap between the two needs to be reduced. You have delivered a strong message here. Excellent use of rhyming in this short space. Nice presentation.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Nice poem, great message. I love the beautiful art work that you have selected. They will definitely make their profits no matter the cost to the people. Thank you so much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
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Nice poem, great message. I love the beautiful art work that you have selected. They will definitely make their profits no matter the cost to the people. Thank you so much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
Comment from Valerie Fish
The evils of corporate greed indeed, this sums up the state of our politics today. Beautifully written, there were some great entries to this contest so a well deserved second place. Good picture too.
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The evils of corporate greed indeed, this sums up the state of our politics today. Beautifully written, there were some great entries to this contest so a well deserved second place. Good picture too.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This poem entry is well written and thought out. It should do well as an entry for the Political 5-7-5 writing prompt. Best of luck in the contest!
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This poem entry is well written and thought out. It should do well as an entry for the Political 5-7-5 writing prompt. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Quite a political statement against greed - Hungry stomachs roar
While corporate profits soar
Greed's illicit lure" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Quite a political statement against greed - Hungry stomachs roar
While corporate profits soar
Greed's illicit lure" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The evils of corporate greed
Illicit Lure
Hello my friend
I agree with you. You make a good point... Corporations 1% need to pay their do to help the 99%
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The evils of corporate greed
Illicit Lure
Hello my friend
I agree with you. You make a good point... Corporations 1% need to pay their do to help the 99%
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
