Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Flourish in the Light"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
8 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Hey your Renga book is coming right along, Gypsy. This haiku has good motion moving forward into the light.
A pleasure to read and review today. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Hey your Renga book is coming right along, Gypsy. This haiku has good motion moving forward into the light.
A pleasure to read and review today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and valuable feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from karenina
How succinct and true! Your inclusion of the MLK quote is especially poignant today as John Lewis is making his way to the rotunda to lay in state. True, also, for each of us! We cannot outrun pain, nor hide from it is the darkness of addiction, depression, sadness or self harm. Ah, but when we stop, make the decision to turn away from those deceptive lures and dare to begin the journey toward healing light...that is when we discover what power there is in faith.--Lovely.--Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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How succinct and true! Your inclusion of the MLK quote is especially poignant today as John Lewis is making his way to the rotunda to lay in state. True, also, for each of us! We cannot outrun pain, nor hide from it is the darkness of addiction, depression, sadness or self harm. Ah, but when we stop, make the decision to turn away from those deceptive lures and dare to begin the journey toward healing light...that is when we discover what power there is in faith.--Lovely.--Karenina
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your detailed feedback and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Hugs,
Gypsy
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I look forward to each of your posts...
they teach me new forms and encourage me to think deeper!--Karenina
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and very true 5-7-5 poem you have penned to follow June's. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. love, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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This is a very nice and very true 5-7-5 poem you have penned to follow June's. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. love, Teri
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Janetsue
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem, Gypsy. Sometimes our own strength is expended and there is nothing left to do but look up into the bright light of truth and decency. We are going through some very dark days and it helps to know that we are not experiencing it alone. Writing poetry also has healing properties. Thank you for sharing this with readers. --Janet
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem, Gypsy. Sometimes our own strength is expended and there is nothing left to do but look up into the bright light of truth and decency. We are going through some very dark days and it helps to know that we are not experiencing it alone. Writing poetry also has healing properties. Thank you for sharing this with readers. --Janet
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Janet.
Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Without light shadows would never form. So with light there must be shadows. Our past are the shadows, some good, some not so good. Thanks for the great visions. Best regards.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Without light shadows would never form. So with light there must be shadows. Our past are the shadows, some good, some not so good. Thanks for the great visions. Best regards.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Kermit.
Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, we all need the Light in order to flourish - physically and spiritually. Right now there is so much darkness and hatred and violence. If only people would seek to understand and show compassion!
I wonder if you can just include the last few entries in the book in your notes. It takes a while to scroll down to the Review box.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Yes, we all need the Light in order to flourish - physically and spiritually. Right now there is so much darkness and hatred and violence. If only people would seek to understand and show compassion!
I wonder if you can just include the last few entries in the book in your notes. It takes a while to scroll down to the Review box.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Okay, I will redo the author notes.
Thank you very much for your review and valuable feedback.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for adding to your own Renga book again. I really enjoyed your focus on flourishing "in the light" and adding complimentary images to intensify the theme. Big cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for adding to your own Renga book again. I really enjoyed your focus on flourishing "in the light" and adding complimentary images to intensify the theme. Big cheers- Joan
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and valuable feedback.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear author,
Wow!!!!!! What an excellent piece of work!!! Awesome job!!!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory,!!!!! Keep writing!!!!!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Dear author,
Wow!!!!!! What an excellent piece of work!!! Awesome job!!!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory,!!!!! Keep writing!!!!!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy