Ethereal Echoes
They're always there...24 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
There is a mystical feel and flow to your words. "Whispered dreams drift beyond sight" are two lines that the reader can relate to, how often we are on the edge of sleep. You have a vivid use of words.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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There is a mystical feel and flow to your words. "Whispered dreams drift beyond sight" are two lines that the reader can relate to, how often we are on the edge of sleep. You have a vivid use of words.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you!! 8-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-7poem about dreams that come when we sleeping and have no control over our thoughts or conscious mind and we are often surprised what we dreamed about.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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A very well-written 3-5-7poem about dreams that come when we sleeping and have no control over our thoughts or conscious mind and we are often surprised what we dreamed about.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a dreamy contest entry, Mystery Writer. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the syllable count per line. I like the image you paired with your words. Those words create great imagery. Perhaps, you may make them one size larger, or not--your choice--they are really tiny.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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This is a dreamy contest entry, Mystery Writer. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the syllable count per line. I like the image you paired with your words. Those words create great imagery. Perhaps, you may make them one size larger, or not--your choice--they are really tiny.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Roger Wilco on the font sizing -- let me know whatcha think now! wink, wink. Thank you for the wonderful review and the helpful suggestion!
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Much easier to read--maybe even 1 size up.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In this huge or infinite universe, ethereal echoes are always there, only discover and know the warning; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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In this huge or infinite universe, ethereal echoes are always there, only discover and know the warning; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
