Ethereal Echoes
They're always there...24 total reviews
Comment from mauial
Nice job with the prompt. Love the imagery and the easy flow of thought in all three lines. I especially liked whispered dreams drift just beyond sight. It is quite melodic.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Nice job with the prompt. Love the imagery and the easy flow of thought in all three lines. I especially liked whispered dreams drift just beyond sight. It is quite melodic.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from jaded831
I dream of being by the sea. Just by looking at the sea one can dream of far off places whether asleep or awake. Your poem adds spark to the inner voyager in all of us. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I dream of being by the sea. Just by looking at the sea one can dream of far off places whether asleep or awake. Your poem adds spark to the inner voyager in all of us. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Excellent entry for the 3-5-7 Poem writing prompt contest.
--good syllable count
--good connection between lines and flow.
-- nice presentation
--it has a haiku feeling
--i like the topic of dreams
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Hello, my friend,
Excellent entry for the 3-5-7 Poem writing prompt contest.
--good syllable count
--good connection between lines and flow.
-- nice presentation
--it has a haiku feeling
--i like the topic of dreams
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
Lovely offering that encapsulates the power and lure of dreams as we drift off to sleep. Serene images - both visual and emotional - are present in your well-crafted offering.
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer,
Lovely offering that encapsulates the power and lure of dreams as we drift off to sleep. Serene images - both visual and emotional - are present in your well-crafted offering.
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Beautiful Lady!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the effective use
of one continuous thought.
-Effective imagery, as well
as alliteration in line one.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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-Great image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the effective use
of one continuous thought.
-Effective imagery, as well
as alliteration in line one.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from The Death
I like the thought you have presented here. Fine use of personification. Good use of D alliteration. Excellent word economy. Fine presentation as well. Good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I like the thought you have presented here. Fine use of personification. Good use of D alliteration. Excellent word economy. Fine presentation as well. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved the peace in these words, the dreamy joy of sleep and how we enjoy falling into it, a good night's sleep richly rewards us when we wake refreshed, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I loved the peace in these words, the dreamy joy of sleep and how we enjoy falling into it, a good night's sleep richly rewards us when we wake refreshed, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
What a marvellous entry in this contest my friend. I love the ambiguity in the narrative, with so few words, you've delivered a great message, good luck in the contest, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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What a marvellous entry in this contest my friend. I love the ambiguity in the narrative, with so few words, you've delivered a great message, good luck in the contest, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from H. Darwin Reeves
Nice description of that place between sleep and barely awake. Those fuzzy dreams that hang just out of reach. One can feel the vail of sleep closing in but not quite there. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Nice description of that place between sleep and barely awake. Those fuzzy dreams that hang just out of reach. One can feel the vail of sleep closing in but not quite there. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from roof35
This is an excellent entry for the three/five/seven contest. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words--it is lovely. This is nicely done.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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This is an excellent entry for the three/five/seven contest. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words--it is lovely. This is nicely done.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you!!
